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ninablues in runaway_tales

pistachio with hot fudge and fresh peaches

Jan 15, 2011 13:35

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: A Break
Rating: PG
Challenge: Pistachio #26: taking a break
Toppings/Extras: hot fudge, fresh peaches
Wordcount: 740
Summary: Horatio Newson and Hallie Rydan discuss Miss Merritt.
Notes: Introducing Hallie Rydan, another hot fudge for the gang. Fresh peaches: These cosmic changes introduce a time for ( Read more... )

[inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] pistachio, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [topping] hot fudge

Comments 11

nathskywalker January 15 2011, 18:01:42 UTC

Newson is right about people liking Hallie even though she is a bitch. At least I like her. There's something unique and interesting about her and I wouldn't want to be friends with her but I don't mind reading about her at all.

ninablues January 15 2011, 18:18:33 UTC

I like her too-- she's only a fly-by mention in Timeless but I'm attempting to get better at writing Newson (especially in a more sympathetic light, which I'm finding really difficult) so I thought I'd chuck this one out. No idea if she'll reappear but she probably will. Thanks!

kaitygirl88 January 15 2011, 21:17:11 UTC

I like Hallie! She seems like a really interesting counter-personality to Horatio. And I admit, the idea of anyone, especially someone as confident as Hallie seems to be, hitting on Adele makes me giggle. XD I'm looking forward to more of her!

ninablues January 15 2011, 21:24:32 UTC

Haha, thank you! At the moment she's pretty two-dimensional and is pretty much nothing more than a foil for Horatio, so I'll probably be exploring her more a little later on. XD

niee87 January 16 2011, 00:01:09 UTC

Foils are good! I think Hallie definitely has potential as a fun villainous character! Curious to see more of her (and her flirting with Adele would SLAY me! - just saying ;))

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ninablues January 16 2011, 20:08:30 UTC

That sounds like a pretty cool description of her. XD Thank you so much! I may have to bring Hallie into the limelight a little more.

ichthusfish January 16 2011, 04:07:47 UTC

LOL! Is Newson in control of anybody? So many people seem to get the better of him and walk all over him, I kind of half feel sorry for him. Hallie is amusing. Now I wonder what her trying to seduce Adele would really be like... =D

ninablues January 16 2011, 20:09:00 UTC

Lol, she's trying to be a good friend. XD Newson's very much in control but those bits are boring so I don't write them, hahaha. Thanks!