Comments | runaway_tales: chocolate and chocolate chip mint with hot fudge and sprinkles

ninablues in runaway_tales

chocolate and chocolate chip mint with hot fudge and sprinkles

Jan 06, 2011 22:09

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: Bodies
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: Chocolate Chip Mint #14: saturated, Chocolate #19: solitude
Toppings/Extras: hot fudge, sprinkles
Wordcount: 370
Summary: Miss Audrey Hawes is the woman for bodies.
Notes: My goodness she scares me.

( every part of them, even the bones )

[topping] sprinkles, [challenge] chocolate chip mint, [inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] chocolate, [topping] hot fudge

Comments 11

shayna611 January 6 2011, 22:30:52 UTC

oh so creepy - I especially liked the bit about "the old fashioned way"

ninablues January 6 2011, 23:08:33 UTC

She's certainly one of the odder characters of my cast... thanks!

smoothiegarten January 6 2011, 23:18:29 UTC

CREEPY. No WONDER Ashdown doesn't want here anywhere near him. O_O

ninablues January 6 2011, 23:36:43 UTC

Ha ha, I know right? He hires her though so he slightly brings it on himself. Oh dear, Ashdown. XD

sarcasticsra January 6 2011, 23:27:36 UTC

Ooooh, very creepy. Nicely done.

niee87 January 7 2011, 01:13:17 UTC

Is it weird that I totally want to see more of her?? Because I do! This really is suitably creepy and I want to know why Ashdown hires her!

ninablues January 7 2011, 01:24:20 UTC

The story of the Ashdowns vs Miss Hawes was a story in itself, unfinished of course, and was the original plot I had for Ashdown, Isaac and Verity. Before this whole time-travel nonsense got involved. Then I thought, "hey, a time machine would spice this up!" and... Timeless happened. XD

I want to keep Miss Hawes' storyline as canon though, so I'll make sure to expand on it the next time a prompt leads me that way!

hi_falootin January 7 2011, 02:53:32 UTC

wow, she sounds like quite the character O_O I'd like to see how she fits into things!