chocolate, vanilla and chocolate chip mint with fresh pineapple

Dec 31, 2010 17:59


Story: Timeless { backstory | index }

Title: Gentle

Rating: PG-13/soft R

Challenge: Chocolate #15: passion, Chocolate Chip Mint #25: rumpled, Vanilla #29: my favourite thing(s)/fetish(es)

Toppings/Extras: fresh pineapple

Wordcount: 304

Summary: Isaac Prowse has a fetish.

Notes: Of a sexual nature, in case you couldn’t guess! And my last post for 2010, see ( Read more... )

[challenge] chocolate chip mint, [inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] chocolate, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple, [challenge] vanilla

Leave a comment

Comments 17

adifferentdrum December 31 2010, 20:37:08 UTC
I'll be over here. Primly fanning myself. Dear Nina that was HAWT. *stamp of approval* :D

Reply

ninablues January 1 2011, 18:28:46 UTC
Nao nao, we both know which of us is most adept at the pronz. :P I tend to veer away from it a little. Thanks for complimenting the hawtness though! XD

Reply

adifferentdrum January 1 2011, 20:31:21 UTC
Oh gosh golly gee I wonder who? *bats lashes* XDDD I am as innocent as a newborn daisyboy! XDDD

(Pee Ess: I may have posted something two hours before the ball drop~ You'll need a tissue. The boys are heartbreaking all over again. D:)

Reply

ninablues January 1 2011, 20:35:32 UTC
I'm catching up on reading the comm now so I should be at the latest Red Tide update soon! *grabs tissues* CURSE YOU D:

To make up for it I fully expect TJ to be on top form!

Reply


smoothiegarten December 31 2010, 21:13:32 UTC
I kind of have a love-hate relationship with sexy pieces (mostly hate :P), but they can tell you a lot about a character when they're good and not just there for the sake of it, and that's why I like this piece. You showed us a lot about how this relationship works through physical description and it's really lovely. Nice job :D

Reply

ninablues January 1 2011, 18:30:35 UTC
Haha yeah, I know what you mean about love/hate... I like reading them if they're done well, but I don't tend to write anything in that direction at all... this is as probably as explicit as it's going to get, for now anyway. XD Glad you liked it though! :D

Reply


kaitygirl88 December 31 2010, 21:23:28 UTC
"and dear God... he loved her so much more than was good for him, so much that it hurt a bit, just like her nails did..." I really liked that line, it really illustrates how Isaac feels about the whole thing: addicted, a little bit helpless, and loving ever minute of it. Sexy time is always a good way to end the year!

Reply

ninablues January 1 2011, 20:00:44 UTC
Haha yeah, I thought I'd leave 2010 on a sexytimes note... XD Thanks!

Reply


ichthusfish January 1 2011, 04:31:40 UTC
Wow! Now this is an Issac and Adele piece, for definate. Very well done. I love the undercurrent of Issac's emotion that runs through it. Very cool :)

Reply

ninablues January 1 2011, 20:01:09 UTC
Definitely gets to the nitty gritty. XD Thanks!

Reply


roisin_farrell January 1 2011, 05:24:04 UTC
After all Adele does have to keep Issac on his toes.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up