Cookies 'n' Cream 9: Flowers

Dec 29, 2010 20:58

Title: Flowers
Main Story: House Calls
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Cookies 'n' cream 9 (wait), malt (Snowflake milkshake), milkshake.
Word Count: 626
Rating: PG.
Summary: Hummer takes Alianna to a place he's found in the woods.
Notes: Thanks to 1306 for looking this over and approving it! Happy new year!

Flowers )

[challenge] cookies n cream, [extra] malt, [inactive-author] bookblather, [extra] milkshake

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kaitygirl88 December 30 2010, 02:15:54 UTC
"Alianna thought she could quite happily stay here forever. Well, as long as she could bring a book. And Hummer." I TOTALLY did a happy dance when I read that! I love these two together so much, they're just so sweet and kind with the perfect amount of awkward thrown in. Great great job!

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bookblather December 31 2010, 05:12:33 UTC
Aren't they adorable? I love them so much, and I'm honored that 1306 let me play with them and that you thought I did it so well. Thank you!

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bookblather December 31 2010, 05:12:49 UTC
I am just like her in that respect, so that bit was easy to write. XD Thank you very much!

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bookblather December 31 2010, 05:13:19 UTC
It's like me, too. I bring books to the bookstore in case I don't find enough books I want to read. XD Thank you so much for letting me play with them! I'm glad the result meets your approval. <3

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smoothiegarten December 30 2010, 04:08:51 UTC
I have so much love for this, seriously. I think you captured Alianna and Hummer's relationship, and 1306's storytelling style, very well. :D Great job!

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bookblather December 31 2010, 05:14:05 UTC
They're so freaking adorable that they were a joy to write, really. I'm pleased you think I matched 1306's style, though! He has a real knack for that weird kind of awkward adorable and I was afraid I wouldn't quite get it, but I'm glad you think I did.

Thanks very much!

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ninablues December 30 2010, 08:38:00 UTC
Absolutely adorable, and you got the two of them spot on. The description of the flowers was wonderful. :)

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bookblather December 31 2010, 05:14:23 UTC
Thank you very much! I think that getting Hummer and Alianna spot on = adorable, really. :D

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