Comments | runaway_tales: Chocolate #17, Amaretto #13, Vinegar #14

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Chocolate #17, Amaretto #13, Vinegar #14

Dec 16, 2010 00:29

Title: Just Another Day at the Office
Prompts: Chocolate #17: freedom, Amaretto #13: tall tale, Vinegar #14: remain seated while ride is in motion
Rating: PG13 for violence and language
Characters: Firebird Blaze, Nicky Nails, Felix Wade, Paul Robinson, Tucker Nielson
Summary: Gah! This turned out so much longer than I expected! Two years after ( Read more... )

[challenge] vinegar, [challenge] amaretto, [inactive-author] kaitygirl, [challenge] chocolate

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ninablues December 16 2010, 09:17:30 UTC

Haha, I really kind of liked Tucker from the start, he was so defiant and fearless in the face of iminent Blaze death. And some of the things he said were hilarious. Hopefully we'll see some more and Firebird won't have him sleeping with the fishes any time soon. XD

Dedicated Paul is dedicated. Give the man a medal!

kaitygirl88 December 16 2010, 16:06:46 UTC

Tucker completely took over when I wrote this piece. He was supposed to just be a victim to illustrate Firebird's control over the town, but he was having none of that victim shit!

If the Olympics ever makes catching loogies a sport, Paul is a shoe-in for the gold medal XD

Thanks for reading!

ninablues December 16 2010, 16:14:29 UTC

Haha, it's great when characters do that. :D I've had a fair few characters suddenly turn on me and say, "Screw you, I'm doing this!" and it always turns out better than it would have. Even if they ignore my plans. SIGH.

kaitygirl88 December 16 2010, 16:29:29 UTC

It's true, Tucker is infinitely more entertaining than the quivering mess I was initially going to make him. I wouldn't be half as interested in bringing him back for another sparring match if he wasn't the defiant asshole he turned out to be.

But damn him for not playing into my God complex! How am I supposed to indulge my inner dictator when he's hawkin loogies at every authority figure in the vicinity! XDD

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kaitygirl88 December 16 2010, 16:08:22 UTC

It's not every man that would catch flying spit for his boss. Paul takes dedication in the work place to a whole new level XD

Oh man! I'm pretty sure Tucker will appear again at some point in time but I hadn't thought of more Tucker and Paul...*evil grin*

Thanks for reading!

roisin_farrell December 16 2010, 13:16:45 UTC

Great catch there Pauly.

I wonder if Tucker is going to be smart enough to take the option that Firebird wants him too.

kaitygirl88 December 16 2010, 16:11:24 UTC

Yep, Paul's got skills. XD

Tucker is more than smart enough to take the right option, the real problem is whether or not he can put aside his innate urge to spit in the face of authority (Bwahaha, horrible pun intended) and get down to business.

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kaitygirl88 December 16 2010, 22:52:46 UTC

lol, Firebird could always give him a catcher's mitt XD

Thanks for reading!

adifferentdrum December 16 2010, 21:13:08 UTC

Okay, this is my first time reading your stuff and I just have to say it's faaab. I can't wait to see the parting memento Tucker's left with. Perhaps a few less teeth or a lovely little firebrand on his bum that says 'Property of Firebird.'

I bet the jokes about Paul will be unending. "Haaaaaaay Paulie~ I hear you're a catcher~ Winkwink~" XDDDD

kaitygirl88 December 16 2010, 22:55:17 UTC

How did you know that Firebird branded her newly-made bitches??? XD

Oh you can be sure that the heckling around the water cooler towards Paul has no end in sight!

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!