Comments | runaway_tales: Guava 4

niee87 in runaway_tales

Guava 4

Dec 12, 2010 17:33

Author: Casey
Story: Nothing is Ever Easy (NIEE) universe, Post NIEE
Challenges: Guava 4 (I hope you brought enough for everyone)
Toppings & Extras: Caramel (this is so caramel it hurts...), Sprinkles, Root Beer Float, Cherry (script), Malt (Pot luck from Falootin: Through these doors walk our champions of tomorrow!)
Word Count: 1488
Rating: PG
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[topping] sprinkles, [extra] root beer float, [extra] malt, [topping] caramel, [challenge] guava, [author] casey, [topping] cherry

Comments 6

bookblather December 13 2010, 04:00:17 UTC

I like this interview! The interviewer seemed pretty good with kids, and I like that the little ones and some of the others just rattled on until someone else interrupted. It's very kid behavior. Good job!

niee87 December 14 2010, 19:23:14 UTC

Good, I'm glad! Yeah, I wanted the interviewer to be good with kids. They are babblers :D I think they come by it naturally but I'm glad they appeared natural. Thanks for reading!

ninablues December 13 2010, 13:21:26 UTC

I love interview format... and the dialogue was really smooth and realistic here. And I absolutely adore super-caramel pieces with the kids of the characters. I can't help it. XD It's Christmassy!

niee87 December 14 2010, 19:27:08 UTC

I'm glad the interview works - I thought it seemed appropriate as an introduction (and then I didn't need any plot :P) Yeah, I had fun with all the kids and discovering their personalities! And it IS Christmassy! :D

smoothiegarten December 17 2010, 20:13:57 UTC

...I totally want to write Dean and Carrie's girls now. Is that bad?

I love this so much, though. It's too bad these are superCaramel characters, but I hope we'll see more of them in the future anyway, because they are preciousness personified.

niee87 December 19 2010, 02:23:44 UTC

No, no, this is not bad at all! (*cackles evilly in the corner about plans coming to fruition*)

I'm glad you love it :D Since Kaylee, Nora and Bethy are half yours after all :P They are totally superCaramel, but maybe something will come to me someday for them to face. Stranger things have happened! We'll probably see some baby Will, Miles and Bex since I do have a whole story planned with Victor in which Will and Miles are born and Shannon's pregnant for Bex.