rhubarb and chocolate chip mint with malt and sprinkles

[ninablues]

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }

Title: Box In A Box

Rating: PG (language)

Challenge: Rhubarb ‘My Treat’ #3: easy for you to say (Adam and Cassidy), Chocolate Chip Mint #12: warped

Toppings/Extras: malt (advent calendar day two), sprinkles

Wordcount: 679

Summary: Adam Kirby is good at drawing, but he still can’t explain temporal fractures.

Notes: My

Comments

[niee87]

Haha, this is ridiculous but I love it! I love how Adam really draws it but the rest are all: huh uh, sure about it. Robyn in a dress makes me giggle. This is a lot of fun. Enjoyed it :D

[ninablues]

Haha, thanks. I had fun with it too. :D As may be obvious...

[shayna611]

This is an awesome piece. It's hard to get that many people together to flow well - especially when they're yelling at each other! - but it works nicely. Best lines "Do you know what nothing looks like? It’s pink!" and Adam's response of "How exciting! What happened? Was it really pink?"

[ninablues]

Thanks! I had a lot of fun with it, haha. I was a bit worried about having them all talking and it all getting a bit confusing, so I'm glad it wasn't too convoluted. :)

[ninablues]

Thank you! I like a bit of bounce between the characters. XDD

[smoothiegarten]

LOL, in all fairness Bradley didn't give him much of a chance to EXPLAIN his diagram. Adam is adorable and it's lovely to see him again. I love the dialogue in this even though I'm not really sure what's going on, heh.

[ninablues]

I know! I really missed Adam! I kind of forgot about him for a while... XD I think I'll have to get some more Adam-ish fics out there soon. Thanks for the treat prompt. :D

[bookblather]

LOL! Oh my God, that's awesome. I love Cassidy's line about crayons, and Bradley's increasing annoyance, and just all the hilarity going on in this. Great job!

[ninablues]

Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing this. And I'm super gleeful that someone mentioned Cassidy's crayon line. :D