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Nov 30, 2010 01:56

Apple Pie #15. Personal Space with Hot Fudge
Story : knights & necromancers
Rating : PG
Timeframe : 1259
Word Count : 582
origfic_bingo prompt - Love Letters ( Read more... )

[challenge] apple pie, [topping] hot fudge, [author] shayna

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hi_falootin November 30 2010, 08:05:13 UTC
ohh man, Shasa is so crazy delusional. I guess Sethan's pretty good at pretending he cares and all, but it's absolutely cringe-worthy to see her fawning like this! I can totally see where the prompt could come in here.

Haha, Sethan having to play along XD I always wind up feeling worse for Shasa in these stories so I will LAUGH AT HIS DISCONTENT

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shayna611 November 30 2010, 08:08:22 UTC
what can I say, the girl has issues (I think in part she has them just so I can make Sethan squirm harder)

he brings it on himself so he deserves the laughs, no?

thanks :)

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nathskywalker November 30 2010, 11:16:12 UTC
Oh I love Sethan torture with Shasa. It would be fun to see one of those pieces from Shasa's point of view. Sethan is so reluctant to do anything and has to force himself and I love reading it. I wonder what he'll do with those love letters. Burn them?

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shayna611 November 30 2010, 16:44:58 UTC
I don't think I've done much from Shasa's pov, it might be fun to try. And I think burning them would definitely appeal to him ;)

Thank you! :)

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ninablues November 30 2010, 11:44:52 UTC
Wow... this is hard on either of them. Although squealy and a bit dim, Shasa's kind of endearing in a "nooo don't do that!" sort of way. I feel bad for her... why is Sethan playing along? I can't imagine it would be to save her feelings, but then again, who knows. XD

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shayna611 November 30 2010, 16:50:37 UTC
Sethan actually started the whole affair. He wants a baby and he'd rather not have it with Reida (for numerous reasons). Considering the prohibition on Sethan and kids, he's got to be pretty sneaky about it, and being Sethan, he's not above convincing the girl he's in love with her just so he can get what he wants.

There's actually a fair amount of stuff around this time period http://shayna611.livejournal.com/68873.html#necro if you'd like.

Thanks :)

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ninablues November 30 2010, 16:54:41 UTC
Thanks for the link! I'll take a look now. :)

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shayna611 November 30 2010, 17:00:17 UTC
Thank you! :)

Sethan's Pocky Chain and Have I ever Steered you Wrong? both kind of cover the whole thing too (but also with later and earlier stuff)

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kay_brooke November 30 2010, 18:51:11 UTC
Haha, I don't know whether to laugh or cringe in second-hand embarrassment with these two. Could a more awkward pairing even exist? Poor Sethan for having to put up with Shasa hanging all over him. Poor Shasa for being led on like that.

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shayna611 November 30 2010, 21:04:32 UTC
It's hard sometimes to even see them as a pairing, it's such an utter sham of a relationship, and they both have such ridiculously different views of what's going on. They're fun to write though, no one can push Sethan's buttons like Shasa can.

thanks :)

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shayna611 December 1 2010, 05:01:31 UTC
he so brings it on himself

thanks :)

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