honeydew pocky with a cherry on top

Nov 27, 2010 00:08


Story: Timeless { backstory | index }

Title: What It’s Like

Rating: G

Challenge: Honeydew #23: morning coffee

Toppings/Extras: cherry (dialogue only), pocky

Wordcount: 100

Summary: Taisy Daniels tries small talk with Victor Blackledge over breakfast. It’s hard.

Notes: Clearly later on in the timeline because Victor is actually talking!

it's like that )

[challenge] honeydew, [inactive-author] ninablues, [extra] pocky, [topping] cherry

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shayna611 November 27 2010, 01:03:22 UTC
poor guy, I can imagine I'd feel the same way - even with just a really good memory, I kind of feel that way - the thought of keeping every detail...it's scary

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nathskywalker November 27 2010, 01:05:19 UTC
The description makes it sound really bad and I can tell that Taisy feels the same from the way she seems so confident before he tells her and then her sentences get less structured to muttering strings of meaningless words. I can picture her expression so well.

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smoothiegarten November 27 2010, 01:20:34 UTC
Oh, Victor :( That's a really apt description of the feeling, though it makes me sad that he pulled that out RIGHT AWAY when she asked. Means he's had a bit of time to think about it, poor guy. Taisy definitely got more than she bargained for with that answer.

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bookblather November 27 2010, 02:31:00 UTC
Awww, Taisy, you're so cute, but Victor doesn't do small talk. Especially not about that.

I really like his description of Remembering. Sounds very cool. Great job!

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ichthusfish November 27 2010, 03:20:57 UTC
Eeep! Very good description! Never knew Vic could talk so much lol! =D

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