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Rocky Road 2: Blinding

Nov 08, 2010 19:02

Title: Blinding
Main Story: In The Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Rocky road 2 (countryside), malt (PFAH: Danny, Gina, Ivy : kissing a fool), fresh pineapple (Blinding, Florence and the Machine), pocky chain ( Read more... )

[challenge] rocky road, [extra] malt, [extra] pocky chain, [inactive-author] bookblather, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple

Comments 14

niee87 November 9 2010, 04:05:22 UTC

Aw, man :) I want to hug Summer to death in this and Olivia as well - GO BACK TO JAKE ALREADY! Also, Vanessa sucks and Gina is awesome and I'm so very glad she left her.

bookblather November 10 2010, 08:13:55 UTC

Summer needs lots of love after her grad school career, this is true. And Olivia just needs some time to sort her head out. And Gina is my favorite.

Thanks so much for reading this! I'm glad you liked it, because I sort of adore it.

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bookblather November 10 2010, 08:14:12 UTC

Thank you so much! I was really proud of this one, so hearing all the compliments means a lot to me.

smoothiegarten November 9 2010, 19:29:42 UTC

Danny's broke my heart right in two (though more for the boy than for her D:) as did Summer's. None of these are a picnic, though, and I'm glad they all go on to find better. And that Olivia eventually goes back to Jake.

bookblather November 10 2010, 08:15:00 UTC

Yeah. I mean, she got to go on living. He died when he was sixteen. And yeah, I had to reassure my betas that all of these ladies eventually find much more awesome ladies and/or gents and/or if they are Olivia they go back to Jake, because really, darling, what even.

Thank you so much!

hi_falootin November 9 2010, 20:22:08 UTC

oh, these are beautiful ♥ I love how you used the song lyrics as prompts!

have to edit to add that the Ivy and Val one is so realistic it hurts. something compelled me to come back and note that!

bookblather November 10 2010, 08:15:31 UTC

It sort of wrote itself, honestly, as soon as I saw that Blinding was the pineapple. I love it when that happens. And yeah, dating a study-abroad student never really ends well. Thanks for reading!

ninablues November 9 2010, 21:58:13 UTC

Oh goodness, you have mad pocky skillz. Every single one of these was a tiny little pocky-sized jab at my heart! The first one was the one that got me most, I think. Wonderful.

bookblather November 10 2010, 08:15:51 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really proud of this, so I'm glad you seem to like it as much as I do.