Comments | runaway_tales: fudge ripple and guava with malt and chopped nuts

ninablues in runaway_tales

fudge ripple and guava with malt and chopped nuts

Oct 28, 2010 09:03

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }

Title: No Need To Say Goodbye

Rating: PG (mild cursing)

Challenge: Fudge Ripple #26: anguish, Guava #27: don’t you cry for me

Toppings/Extras: malt, chopped nuts

Wordcount: 433

Summary: Prowse must return to his own time. Miss Merritt finds herself uncharacteristically saddened.

Notes: 1306’s lovely malt prompt: “I’ll ( Read more... )

[topping] chopped nuts, [extra] malt, [inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] guava, [challenge] fudge ripple

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ninablues October 28 2010, 13:31:51 UTC

Lol, I'd never thought of her as a tsundere, but it's sorta right! She's only awesome when Isaac's there to keep her from going mental. XD

kay_brooke October 28 2010, 17:00:30 UTC

Haha, Adele. She has feelings. :)

ninablues October 28 2010, 19:51:06 UTC

Surprisingly so!

hi_falootin October 28 2010, 17:16:26 UTC

D'aww, Adele not being a hardass for once ♥ Though I'm not sure how they would navigate the 1500 year time difference...

ninablues October 28 2010, 19:50:31 UTC

Lol, Adele does possess a time machine but it's not strictly hers and it's only meant to be used for emergencies... XD

nathskywalker October 28 2010, 20:26:33 UTC

The 1500 years would make a long-distance relationship really difficult. I wonder what the new ending is if this isn't it anymore; I'm guessing Prowse stays with Adele.

The scene was very touching, especially Adele's uncertainty about how much feeling she can show.

ninablues October 28 2010, 20:52:59 UTC

Yep, at the moment the canon is Isaac deciding not to go back to the past, although as I mentioned before I'm worried it's a bit too happy-happy-happy. Nevertheless, I cannot resist the possible caramels that could come of it, and it made more sense when I thought about what the characters would choose to do.

And yeah, I don't think it gets much more long-distance than a time barrier but apparently Isaac seems to think they'll manage it. XD Thanks!

bookblather October 29 2010, 00:20:13 UTC

Man, I never thought I'd wibble for Adele, but... *wibbles* Poor love. Maybe she can come back and visit! Or vice versa. I'm sure Ashdown wouldn't mind a bit. AUGH. So glad this is chopped nuts.