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Creamsicle 14: Discipline

Oct 24, 2010 16:52

Title: Discipline
Main Story: In The Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Creamsicle 14 (discipline), rainbow sprinkles (Henrik), pocky, fresh pineapple ( Girl, you really got me goin' //You got me so I don't know what I'm doin' -- You Really Got Me, The Kinks ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [challenge] creamsicle, [extra] pocky, [inactive-author] bookblather, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple

Comments 12

niee87 October 25 2010, 00:08:52 UTC

Oh dear. This is so incredibly heartwrenching in just a few words. Poor Henrik - I especially loved the "except to live, he told her to live and she didn't listen" part!

bookblather October 26 2010, 01:50:35 UTC

Thank you! I was rather proud of that bit, so I'm glad that it worked. Thank you for reading!

sarcasticsra October 25 2010, 00:33:57 UTC

Oh god, poor Henrik. Agreeing that the "except to live, he told her to live and she didn't listen" line is excellent; really hits you hard. Lovely job.

bookblather October 26 2010, 01:50:58 UTC

Thank you very much! Like I said, I was rather proud of that line, so I'm glad it seems to be resonating with people.

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bookblather October 26 2010, 01:51:15 UTC

Thank you very much.

(am I catching up with you in heartbreaking yet?)

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bookblather October 26 2010, 01:53:15 UTC

OH YEAH RIGHT I will totes be in tears. Legit tears.

smoothiegarten October 25 2010, 04:48:53 UTC

I'm all teary now :( I'm sure no one thought less of Henrik for crying at his wife's funeral. You packed quite a bit of punch into this.

bookblather October 26 2010, 01:51:32 UTC

Nope, nobody thinks any less of him for crying at any point. It's just a Thing of his.

Thank you so much!

hi_falootin October 25 2010, 05:09:21 UTC

aww, sad face :( I like what you did with the prompt

bookblather October 26 2010, 01:51:39 UTC

Thank you very much!