Guava 24, Trail Mix 20, French Vanilla 5

Oct 17, 2010 21:55

Author: Casey
Story: Nothing is Ever Easy (NIEE) universe, Post NIEE
Challenges: Guava 24 (just be yourself), Trail Mix 20 (on the doorstep), French Vanilla 5 (crème de la crème)
Toppings & Extras: Caramel, Chopped Nuts, Milkshake (Carrie is Marina’s), Pocky Chain
Word Count: 600
Rating: PG
Summary: Carrie gets introduced to Dean’s family. Aka an ( Read more... )

[topping] chopped nuts, [topping] caramel, [challenge] guava, [challenge] trail mix, [challenge] french vanilla, [author] casey, [extra] pocky chain, [extra] milkshake

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smoothiegarten October 18 2010, 04:32:35 UTC
You already know my feelings on canonosity. :D

I really like this! I can definitely see Carrie wanting to join KIN and getting along with most of these fine people. Love Dean getting totally blindsided by the mentions of it too. :D Yay!

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niee87 October 21 2010, 19:26:25 UTC
I do and I love itttt! Thank you :D

Yeah, as you said, she totally would want to join and I'm sure that'll work :) She will get mentions in the NaNo! Yeah, Dean's a little slow on occasion, but he catches on!

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ninablues October 18 2010, 07:21:29 UTC
Nice pocky chain! A lot of action stuffed into each segment, and the diaogue is really fluid and realistic. :) Also, love Morgan.

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niee87 October 21 2010, 19:27:13 UTC
Thanks! I tried to fit a lot into this and it seemed to work and thanks for the dialogue comment :) I try really hard on my dialogue. Morgan's one of my favorites! Thanks for reading :D

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