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A Tango of Sorts

Oct 07, 2010 15:17

Title: A Tango of Sorts
Author: deecherrywolf
Flavors: Honeydew, Banana Cream
Prompts: #1 Slow Dance, #8 Lead
Rating: PG-13
Story: There is none yet. This is me testing out my characters for NaNoWriMo. I did more plotish ones at fapplesauce, but I thought it would be nice to use this community to test out just regular voices :3 ( Read more... )

[challenge] honeydew, [challenge] banana cream

Comments 3

ninablues October 7 2010, 21:00:04 UTC

Welcome to the comm!

Nice piece-- the punchline at the end is wonderfully led up to (ooh, unintended pun), and it's all very cute! Short and sweet is a good way to go I think, I have a tendency to ramble on. I look forwards to reading more. 8D

bookblather October 8 2010, 00:02:29 UTC

Ha! I laughed. I like the thread of learning to dance shifting into, ahem, dancing. They seem very cute together, and I really like your dialogue.

ichthusfish October 8 2010, 02:11:42 UTC

Hi! Welcome to RATs =D

LOL! That's one way to learn how to dance I guess. And I'd have to agree about what's on TV. I snickered at “The woman isn't suppose to.” Very nice start :)