Guava and Trail Mix with Hot Fudge and a Cherry On Top!

Oct 04, 2010 21:50



Story: Timeless { backstory | index }

Title: Bubbles

Rating: G/PG (mild cursing)

Challenge: Guava #23: more than you can chew, Trail Mix #24: middle of nowhere

Toppings/Extras: cherry (first person and present tense), hot fudge

Wordcount: 641

Summary: Miss Merritt debates what most irritates her: seasickness, or Isaac Prowse.

Notes: All right, I’m going ( Read more... )

[inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] guava, [challenge] trail mix, [topping] hot fudge, [topping] cherry

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shayna611 October 4 2010, 21:27:02 UTC
for the full schedule for the challenge you'll want to check out http://community.livejournal.com/the_malt_shoppe/78706.html - there might still be some folks looking for a teammate, or you're welcome to go solo. While you're at it come join the_malt_shoppe. We host lots of prompt games and challenges there.

is it evil of me to like Prowse best in all of this? ;)

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ninablues October 5 2010, 06:30:57 UTC
OK, cool-- I had a look around for where there might be more information but I couldn't find it, haha. Thanks.

And no, it's not evil at all! :D

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nathskywalker October 4 2010, 21:29:50 UTC
“Cold hearted as a dead penguin,”

Great line. Prowse has some really great lines, actually.

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ninablues October 5 2010, 06:32:23 UTC
Yeah, he's got a good dose of snark in him. Miss Merritt usually gets a few good lines too, but she was feeling a little peaky in this one. XD

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nathskywalker October 5 2010, 14:11:38 UTC
I totally understand that when you're seasick, you lose some of your snark.

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ninablues October 5 2010, 06:33:54 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad and a little surprised at the Prowse love, haha. I like him too. And I decided to keep my description minimal in this one (I do tend to overdo it sometimes), I'm glad you liked what there was though. :D

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bookblather October 5 2010, 01:04:28 UTC
Thirding the love for Prowse! He's just so funny in such a sneaky way. I do feel rather bad for Miss Merritt-- I get seasick too-- but he is only trying to help and all that.

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ninablues October 5 2010, 06:35:50 UTC
Yeah, she gets treated pretty badly by Newson, but she does nothing to help herself. Thanks!

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ninablues October 5 2010, 06:36:11 UTC
Haha, thank you. :)

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