Rum Raisin 6: Nightfall

Sep 17, 2010 13:46

Title: Nightfall
Main Story: In The Heart. Now with shiny new introduction!
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Rum raisin 6 (lover), rainbow sprinkles (Clara's parents), butterscotch, fresh pineapple (What are you waiting for? Just surrender here tonightWord Count: 1139 ( Read more... )

[challenge] rum raisin, [topping] sprinkles, [topping] butterscotch, [inactive-author] bookblather, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple

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smoothiegarten September 17 2010, 21:05:02 UTC
I had a peek at your new intro and ALAN TUDYK ALAN TUDYK ALAN TUDYK. That is all.

Fluff about minor characters is not unwelcome! I love getting little bits of background. It fleshes out the main story even better when you know what comes before, after, and around it. And these two are just adorable. They play off each other very well, and I love how Gary just went with the impromptu proposal without batting an eye. Awesome. <3

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bookblather September 19 2010, 19:55:17 UTC
*gigglefit* He is pretty awesome.

I'm so glad you liked it! I adore these two, and I want to write tons and tons of stuff about them, but they are so minor it's not even funny and yeah. But if people like them, I have an excuse. :D Thanks for reading!

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bookblather September 19 2010, 19:55:59 UTC
There will be more of them, oh yes. I kind of fell in love with them whilst writing the pocky chain. I'm glad you enjoyed it! That gives me an excuse. Thanks for reading!

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sarcasticsra September 18 2010, 02:04:06 UTC
Ahaha, so cute. Lynne telling him to buy a ring tomorrow, and Gary starting to laugh. Awesome.

P.S. I read your shiny new intro. Melanie marries a Ben Pierce, does she? I see what you did there. =P

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bookblather September 19 2010, 19:56:41 UTC
Thank you! I do so love these two.

Heee, I knew you'd catch that. I CAN'T HELP MYSELF THE SHOUTOUTS JUST SORT OF APPEAR OKAY.

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niee87 September 22 2010, 01:31:25 UTC
Haha, I agree with Marina about Alan Tudyk! :P

But nice to see this of Gary and Lynne and the two of them are super ridiculously adorable!

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bookblather September 24 2010, 04:31:32 UTC
Thank you! I love them so very much myself that it's lovely to see other people thinking they're adorable too. And Alan Tudyk is also awesome. :D Thanks for reading!

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ichthusfish September 24 2010, 00:57:18 UTC
LMAO! Nice sort-of proposal. I agree with Lynne, five years is a very long time to wait. Very cute and fluffy :)

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bookblather September 24 2010, 04:34:16 UTC
Gary has this thing where he'll get into a comfortable rut and then forget that not everyone wants to just keep going in the same rut forever, so Lynne tends to instigate changes in their relationship. He did almost beat her to it on this one, though, so I'll give him points for trying.

Thanks for reading!

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