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Sep 14, 2010 23:43

Author: Jelly
Index: Here.
Challenge: Vanilla # 18 [a dream/nightmare/trouble sleeping]
Black Raspberry # 17 [You can't have your cake and eat it too.]
Toppings: None
Extras: None
Characters: Nelson and Sahara
Rating: pg-13, language
Concrit:  Be extra gentle, please.

Just breath )

[topping] sprinkles, [challenge] black raspberry, [challenge] vanilla

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marzipan_yumyum September 15 2010, 05:41:35 UTC
It was really weird writing this from Nelsons point of view, because I usually write from Sahara's, but I wanted to show that love aspect that not even Sahara knows about, so yeah. And yes, Sahara is in a lot of trouble, lol.

Thanks, that is most def. what I was going for. Glad you like it!

GO PHINEAS AND FERB ICONS!!!

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shayna611 September 15 2010, 13:22:27 UTC
No sprinkles - Nelson is pretty clearly a main character, and even if he wasn't Sahara is in this too - the idea of sprinkles is to explore folks that don't get much exposure at all and leave out the main folks (toppings are covered pretty well in the faq if you'd like)

I like the PoV switch - Nelson's a big softie ;)

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marzipan_yumyum September 16 2010, 04:25:28 UTC
Well thanks for telling me, I read the information on the faq but I just wasn't sure, and I figured it would be easier to just add and take it out later if I had to (which I am in just a minute).

Thanks!

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