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bookblather September 15 2010, 06:16:17 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHA OH YOU TWO. Stay BFFs forever plzthx. Seriously, I love your dialogue, it's just so damn funny. And I like that Jules can be totally hot for Carmine while still completely aware of how dangerous he is and how bad an idea it is. Great job.

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luna_moonsilver September 15 2010, 09:35:34 UTC
Hahahaha ohhh, poor Jules :) This is still awesome though (and hilarious); I just love them all to pieces xD

Even if Carmine is weirdly sadistic. Whatevs. He's still hilarious. :D

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ichthusfish September 17 2010, 02:34:37 UTC
Hahahaha! Saw that ending coming a mile off. Also wondering if Jules is really expecting Carmine not to bust his way out of his handcuffs. He doesn't sound like a guy to sit quietly waiting for the maid to turn up. *snickers* :)

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