Comments | runaway_tales: Peanut Butter #2, Molasses #4, Star Fruit #25, with Butterscotch, Sprinkles, and Whipped Cream

askingxalice in runaway_tales

Peanut Butter #2, Molasses #4, Star Fruit #25, with Butterscotch, Sprinkles, and Whipped Cream

Aug 08, 2010 02:56

Author: askingxalice
Title: Marina Del Rey
Summary: How Sunset came to be.
Story: Phase
Timeline: July 1981 - Rose is 17.
Challenge: Peanut Butter #2 (water), Molasses #4 (forbidden fruit), Star Fruit #25 (my best wasn’t good enough)
Toppings/Extras: Butterscotch, Rainbow Sprinkles, Whipped Cream
Word Count: 442
Rating: PG

( Rose completely blamed Marina Del Rey for this situation. )

[inactive-author] nikki, [challenge] peanut butter, [topping] sprinkles, [challenge] star fruit, [topping] whipped cream, [challenge] molasses, [topping] butterscotch

Comments 2

bookblather August 9 2010, 05:04:44 UTC

Yeesh, poor Rose. She is not in a good place right now. You do a very good job of conveying the sense of entrapment, like she feels like she has no way out. Awesome.

smoothiegarten August 10 2010, 17:02:06 UTC

Eep. Yeah, unfortunately for Rose, Marina Del Rey is a sexy, sexy place. (My parents had their first date there. It's lovely.) I feel so bad for her, and this definitely explains why she was so reluctant to let Sunset go to America so she could be with Damian. At least she has her sister for support.