FOTD, Star Fruit, Molasses, Cookies N Cream, with Malt, Pocky, and Sprinkles

Jul 30, 2010 17:35

Author: askingxalice 
Title: Dark Side
Summary: Sarah isn’t very happy when she finds out about Andy’s more prominent customers.
Story: Phase
Timeline: October 2008 - Andy is 24, Sarah is 19.
Challenge: FOTD (casuistry), Star Fruit #21 (do as I say, not as I do), Molasses #12 (devil’s advocate)
Word Count: 634
Rating: PG-13

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gandolforf July 30 2010, 22:49:10 UTC
Haha, I liked all three of these. I loled at Sarah's last line, pictured Chloe's face at Oz's information about his car, and Zach's adorable date offer.

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askingxalice July 31 2010, 01:23:44 UTC
I really want to find someone to draw Chloe's reaction to that, just for the huge amount of D: it would bring.

Thanks for reading!

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subluxate July 30 2010, 22:54:42 UTC
Lol, Sarah. They're so amused by you and your "they're not the nicest people".

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askingxalice July 31 2010, 01:24:48 UTC
Sarah pretty much keeps her mouth shut when they're around for the first few months, until she gets used to the idea. THEY SCARE HER, JUST A BIT.

Thanks for reading!

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sarcasticsra July 31 2010, 01:17:10 UTC
LOL @ Zach's date offer. I think that's even better than Oz's, "You need to go out with me." Awesome.

And, hee, Sarah. Love her reaction.

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askingxalice July 31 2010, 01:26:58 UTC
Zach is as smooth as gravel. Really, he's so lucky that Adrianna understands that him and socialization don't mix well. Otherwise, she might not have gotten what he was getting at. (And, he is in SO MUCH DENIAL. "I don't like her, shut up.")

Sarah slowly goes from D: to :|. Eventually, she stops being quite as scared of them, and just kind of - gets used to them, I guess. I don't know if she'd ever really joke around with them or anything.

Thanks for reading!

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sarcasticsra July 31 2010, 02:01:10 UTC
Even the nicer ones? Is comes in to have her tattoo done in 2013, and she'd be friendly enough. And she's only a year older, if I have done my math correctly.

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askingxalice July 31 2010, 02:15:34 UTC
Now that I think about it more, I take the last part back. Right now, her muse is stuck in aadfljan mode, so she isn't exactly cooperating with answers. Once she calmed down about everything, she'd treat them like any other customer, though I think she'd be more friendly with Isabella and maybe Johnny. Nicoletta would make her a bit wary, I think. (I know Nicoletta would scare the hell out of Adrianna.)

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smoothiegarten July 31 2010, 06:49:09 UTC
Hahaha, Sarah, never change. That is a totally understandable reaction. I'd like to see her having to interact with one of the Corlionis in future and see how well she does at not pissing them off.

That...is certainly one way to make your daughter leave your car alone, Oz.

I never considered Zachery/Adrianna before, but it works somehow. They seem to suit each other pretty well, and I was hoping Adrianna would eventually find someone after the Angie incident and having to reject Sarah. His attempt at asking her to lunch was adorable and funny.

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askingxalice July 31 2010, 06:56:39 UTC
Oz says that it's his payback for her puberty years. :| Oz can be the best dad in the world sometimes, BUT THEN he does stuff like this. It's funny, but damn, it's mean.

Poor Chloe didn't ride in that car for months afterward.

I'm doing my best to write a Milkshake for Phase/Polyfacted, but it's a bit halted at the moment since I can't quite decide which Corlioni to write about. I'm considering maybe Isabella, but I'm not really certain just yet.

Yeah, Adrianna muse actually brought that up one day. It surprised the hell out of me, but it worked, enough. Zach and Adri are perfect for each other in the most non-conventional way. Even though Zachery was in COMPLETE DENIAL about the whole thing for the longest time. ("Shut up, I don't like her, she's just a FRIEND God what is with you people.")

Thanks for reading!

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kunenk July 31 2010, 14:02:46 UTC
I really enjoyed the last one. The first one was pretty amusing, too!

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askingxalice August 4 2010, 05:25:31 UTC
Thank you! Thanks for reading. :)

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