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Peanut Butter, Molasses, and Star Fruit - Shoot to Thrill

Jul 30, 2010 03:36

Author: askingxalice
Title: Shoot to Thrill
Summary: Andy isn’t very happy with Oz’s new obsession.
Story: Phase
Timeline: April 2017 - Andy is 33, Oz is 31
Challenge: Peanut Butter #6 (metal), Molasses #29 (slow burn), Star Fruit #7 (the pleasure is all mine)
Word Count: 1,021
Rating: NC-17

( Andy had thought Oz had gone insane. )

[inactive-author] nikki, [challenge] peanut butter, [challenge] star fruit, [challenge] molasses

Comments 9

gandolforf July 30 2010, 11:27:01 UTC

Haha, best reward ever! I love how Andy goes in there totally ready to be angry, and gets a bit of a surprise instead. Just wait until get you bent over the hood, Andy XD

By that time, Oz hadn’t noticed him

I'm not sure, but do you mean that Oz had noticed him by that time? I thought he must have from the smirk...?

One note: engine grease is reeeeeally thick. I don't think sweat will make trails in it--it takes a really strong soap just to get it off hands, so...I wouldn't think it'd be great on Andy's dick either, especially if it can get inside and cause an infection. I mean, Zest won't even get it all the way off--you need Lava soap, which has pumice in it. (ASK ME HOW I KNOW.)

Okay, done, sorry, just wanted to let you know.

hi_falootin July 30 2010, 15:44:49 UTC

oh man, I remember that Lava soap from when I was oil painting-your hands even get sore from washing with it too often!

askingxalice July 30 2010, 17:28:25 UTC

Yes, that is what I meant, and thanks for letting me know! This is what I get for writing at 2 AM and not checking any of the details I really know nothing about. I know next to jack about cars, except how to check a few things, drive them, and put gas in them.

I'll get to working on changing everything now. :D Thanks so much for reading! (And correcting me!)

ETA: And everything is edited! Hopefully it's a bit more correct now.

hi_falootin July 30 2010, 15:43:29 UTC

ha, I liked this! it was hot and kind of sweet at the same time :)

askingxalice July 30 2010, 17:29:39 UTC

It was only supposed to be sweet, but the boys decided about halfway through that, no, they wanted porn. And then they kept up up until 4 AM so I could write it. Boys.

Thanks for reading!

thaizertazerll July 31 2010, 06:44:51 UTC

I had some witty comment regarding sheep and muppets, but it's been erased from my mind. Give me a few hours of sleep and I'll see what I can do.

you know how much I love this piece. B| unf. both for how it adds to Oz's character with lolcars and for said unf.

jesus wept in a plastic tea shop. I will post something that makes sense in the morning.

askingxalice July 31 2010, 06:47:05 UTC

Thai, ILU. :|

bookblather August 1 2010, 17:03:09 UTC

WELL THEN. Handy way of getting out of a lecture, there, Oz. When in doubt, handjob!

Seriously, I think this is as cute as really hot smut can get, especially Oz's cunning plans for the car. Excellent job.

askingxalice August 1 2010, 20:29:50 UTC

It's pretty much the same way for Andy, except since he has a split tongue, he resorts to blow jobs instead. Honestly, these two...

Oz also basically jumps Andy as soon as he comes home from work, on the day he finishes the car. I really have to wonder if this poor car knows what it's getting into.

Thanks for reading! <3