Candy Bar Crunch #20 - Chocolate #10, #21 - Soy #2, #13 - Starfruit #1, #14

Jul 13, 2010 06:45

Author: askingxalice
Title: Welcome to the Family
Summary: Chloe convinces Andy to take on one last apprentice.
Story: Second Genesis
Timeline: September 2032 - Chloe is 16, Andy is 48.
Challenge: Soy #13 (the arrival of help when in need), Starfruit #14 (show them who’s boss)
Word Count: 289
Rating: G

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bookblather July 18 2010, 10:21:58 UTC
Chloe tends to own the people in her life, doesn't she? She can talk Andy into anything, clearly, and Kurt just has NO chance against anything she wants. Also, I really like the structure of the one with Kurt noticing. It works really well and they sort of roll into one another.

Love that last one, too, even though it hurts to read. Oh, Adrianna, you need hugs, poor baby. What a first patient to lose. I'm glad Andy came for her, though; he's a good brother.

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askingxalice July 18 2010, 14:38:11 UTC
You're completely right about Chloe. Oz has said that they should have made her first full name 'Category Five Hurricane Chloe', because no one really stands a chance once she gets her mind made up about something.

Of course, it really helps her case that Oz has taught her a lot of tricks into convincing Andy to do things their way.

Andy really is the best brother. He's really the only one that would have known that trying to to hug her and saying how he's sorry would have just made her fall into a sadness that she couldn't afford to fall into at that point. Having her logically walk through it and explain that nothing could have been done helped her more than anything.

Thanks for reading! <3

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hi_falootin August 18 2010, 21:42:55 UTC
Aw, the LAST one is a painful read. (derf, I was going via the Cones!) But very well-written ♥

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