Comments | runaway_tales: Mocha 30 & CCM 11

niee87 in runaway_tales

Mocha 30 & CCM 11

Jun 14, 2010 22:36

Author: Casey
Story: Nothing is Ever Easy (NIEE) universe, Pre-NIEE
Challenge: Mocha 30 (till the bitter end) & CCM 11 (translucent)
Toppings & Extras: Butterscotch, Cherry (attention to keeping passive voice out)
Word Count: 649
Rating: G
Summary: Resh gets an unexpected nighttime visit.
Notes: Resh, and other mentioned characters, are from the ( Read more... )

[challenge] chocolate chip mint, [topping] butterscotch, [author] casey, [topping] cherry, [challenge] mocha

Comments 4

smoothiegarten June 15 2010, 02:52:32 UTC

These two would've been so cute together. :( You did the right thing, though.

niee87 June 16 2010, 02:22:00 UTC

They really would have :( I like Resh and Alicia but they just don't have the same cuteness factor. Alicia's too rough-and-tumble for that. But yeah, I know I did. Kenz had to go :( I have to admit, had fun writing 'goodbye' pieces, since this is #2 :P

mari_mac1109 June 15 2010, 09:15:24 UTC

I haven't read many of your tales yet and this made me realize that I really need to change that. What a great piece!

I love how matter-of-fact Kenz is at the start until she starts giggling... Just visualizing this conversation--it is so friggin' cool. And kind of lovely and kind of cute and kind of sad. But I definitely want to read more now!

niee87 June 16 2010, 02:24:15 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! That totally made my day!

Kenz was very matter-of-fact in life, figured that wouldn't change in death! I'm glad all those emotions came through - that's what I was aiming for! Thank you again! I appreciate the comment!