Comments | runaway_tales: Cayenne 11, Mocha 29, & CCM 7

niee87 in runaway_tales

Cayenne 11, Mocha 29, & CCM 7

May 30, 2010 22:55

Author: Casey
Story: Nothing is Ever Easy (NIEE) universe, post NIEE
Challenge: Cayenne 11 (ambush), Mocha 29 (when all else fails), CCM 7 (turbulent)
Toppings & Extras: Caramel
Word Count: 1,114
Rating: PG (minor violence, child kidnapping)
Summary: Although Dean doesn’t think he exists, he finds out the hard way that someone knows about him.
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[challenge] cayenne, [topping] caramel, [challenge] chocolate chip mint, [author] casey, [challenge] mocha

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niee87 June 2 2010, 03:21:19 UTC

Yeah, it's really not nice to poor Dean at all :(

Yay! I'm glad the fighting came across well :) They're not always all that easy. Thanks for reading! (also, more Dean following this coming fairly soon)

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niee87 June 2 2010, 03:21:58 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad the fighting came across well. I try really hard to make it both realistic and easy to read :) Dean does get some payback fairly soon! More on him soon!

smoothiegarten June 2 2010, 02:24:31 UTC

NO DEAN NO. :( I loved the banter with Sorin and Russ while it lasted, and the action was clear. You gave good visuals there.

niee87 June 2 2010, 03:25:53 UTC

I KNOW *SADFACE* Sorin and Russ banter is never, ever misplaced :D Glad that the action clearly worked - I was striving for that (and have only rewritten this scene like 8 times :P so I should hope I'd managed some clarity by now.)