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smoothiegarten in runaway_tales

Chocolate 13; Pistachio 26

May 23, 2010 00:15

Author: Marina
Story: Shifts universe (pre-Tremors)
Challenge: Chocolate 13 (humility), Pistachio 26 (taking a break)
Toppings: Whipped Cream (Eleazar is twelve), Cherry (present tense, no dialogue)
Word Count: 159
Rating: G
Summary: How Eleazar made the decision to control his impulsiveness forevermore.
Notes: Follows this. Tenth Cherry, whee!

( It is only then that he realizes that there are more important things than being right. )

[author] marina, [topping] whipped cream, [challenge] pistachio, [challenge] chocolate, [topping] cherry

Comments 8

bookblather May 23 2010, 07:57:26 UTC

Awww, Eleazar. He just sounds so lonely. Poor kid; I hope he manages to achieve his goal!

smoothiegarten May 23 2010, 21:50:38 UTC

He does, within the next year. :) Thank you!

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smoothiegarten May 23 2010, 21:50:58 UTC

He does manage it, yes. Thank you! :)

niee87 May 23 2010, 14:15:43 UTC

Aww, yay Elie! I'm glad he figures this out but kind of sad that he has to too. Although, since I know it doesn't make him any less opinionated, I'm not too worried :P

smoothiegarten May 23 2010, 21:53:02 UTC

Haha, well, all he's doing is changing his methodology.

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smoothiegarten May 23 2010, 21:54:29 UTC

This decision serves him pretty well in the future, really, and he does eventually get to go to school because of it, so he'll be fine. :) Thank you!

ichthusfish May 24 2010, 00:19:40 UTC

Yay! Go for it Eleazar! Nicely done :)

smoothiegarten May 28 2010, 04:36:41 UTC

Thank you! :D