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Chocolate Chip Mint 7, Fudge Ripple 10: Family

May 08, 2010 00:12

Title: Family
Main Story: In the HeartFlavors, Toppings, Extras: Chocolate chip mint 7 (turbulent), fudge ripple 10 (fear), brownie ( Read more... )

[challenge] chocolate chip mint, [extra] brownie, [challenge] fudge ripple, [inactive-author] bookblather

Comments 24

subluxate May 8 2010, 07:45:42 UTC

I love this. I love it, I love it, I love it. Ivy, being strong and brave! Gail, protective mother! Ivy and Nathan's relationship! And then there's Brad, someone to thoroughly loathe. Awesome.

I did note an errant comma, if you don't mind me pointing it out.

bookblather May 8 2010, 23:10:31 UTC

Sknsgnjng I thought I caught them all. Please do point it out so I can fix it. And thank you so much for your compliments! It's pretty much everything I was trying to get across. *is blushing madly now* Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

subluxate May 8 2010, 23:33:29 UTC

which was, then turned to Ivy.

bookblather May 9 2010, 08:28:33 UTC

Oh, that one's supposed to be there, actually. Thanks, though!

lady_macbeth_19 May 8 2010, 11:24:31 UTC

Aww! That's such a sweet endings. Something has to be said about great dads ♥

bookblather May 8 2010, 23:10:54 UTC

Word. :D I try to write about the good ones. Brad doesn't count. Thanks for reading, and for your compliments!

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bookblather May 8 2010, 23:11:28 UTC

Bwahahaha, my cunning plan continues apace. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that Ivy is still lovely! Thanks for reading.

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bookblather May 8 2010, 23:12:11 UTC

I don't like writing sad endings, so you probably won't find a lot of them in my stories. And yes, Ivy is pretty awesome. She's my favorite. :D

Thanks for reading all the way through, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

hi_falootin May 8 2010, 23:37:39 UTC

First I have to say, I love how Gina and Ivy are together. And the phone conversation between Ivy and her mother was great too. Well, really, I think I liked all of it ;)

You don't even take a date to Denny's, you take crazy relatives there when you want to spend the least amount of time possible with them. LOL at this bit. I think I had a character take a date to Denny's once but it wasn't supposed to be classy. Though this Denny's has a bar, of which I am jealous ;)

Also "Do I need to cut a bitch?" and "Let's go get ice cream and make out." ILU, GINA ♥

And the end is great.

bookblather May 9 2010, 08:31:40 UTC

"Bar" is probably the wrong word, but the Denny's near my house has a counter where you can sit and eat food and get drinks, like at a sushi bar. Not sure what else to call it.

And yes, I love Ivy and Gina together too. They're kind of perfect. :D You nailed all my favorite parts for praise, too.

Thanks so much for reading, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it!