Comments | runaway_tales: Cayenne 10, CCM 18

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Cayenne 10, CCM 18

May 04, 2010 21:09

Author: Casey
Story: Nothing is Ever Easy (NIEE) universe, during NIEE
Challenge: Cayenne 10 (Fortifications), Chocolate Chip Mint 18 (ancient)
Toppings: Sprinkles (Jay)
Word Count: 352
Rating: PG (one instant of language)
Summary: Jay’s first thoughts of the castle
Notes: Just prior to the big battle (which includes the Sorin vs. Beau piece). ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [challenge] cayenne, [challenge] chocolate chip mint, [author] casey

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niee87 May 7 2010, 21:28:33 UTC

I love the banter that my characters sometimes provide me with :D I'm glad you like the descriptions! It's something I know is a weak spot for me and I've been working on it! Thanks!

ichthusfish May 6 2010, 01:21:09 UTC

I enjoyed the descriptions of the landscape and the castle. It does sound very imposing. I was amused by him being more intimidated by how to break in without breaking it than the castle itself :)

niee87 May 7 2010, 21:29:09 UTC

I'm glad the castle came across as imposing - I was trying to get that impression across in as short a space as possible. Haha, that's such a Jay thought, but also a true one.

smoothiegarten May 11 2010, 08:18:09 UTC

Jay's random knowledge of ancient Tiran history will never, EVER fail to amuse me. (Needs moar Jay/Jess *whistle*) I'm so happy to see new NIEE stuff. It's been so long!

niee87 May 12 2010, 01:47:48 UTC

Haha, I know! That totally happened accidently but he knows his history. I should write a short some day about little Jay learning history. I can just imagine him being a total brat/pain in the ass to his teachers but absorbing every word. (Aw, I did/do love Jay/Jess, but they work so much better as friends in the end :D). It's not exactly NEW NIEE stuff, but it is rewritten NIEE stuff (although some of the dialogue here is the same), and I'm having a lot of fun getting back to it!