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Vanilla 3, chocolate 14, strawberry 13: The World Turned Upside Down

Mar 02, 2010 03:07

Title: The World Turned Upside Down
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Vanilla 3 (chores), chocolate 14 (vengeance), strawberry 13 (smoke), rainbow sprinkles, pocky.
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG.
Summary: Hugh hears the last thing he ever wanted to hear.
Notes: Follows Little by Little, is followed by I Know This Much Is True.

( The World Turned Upside Down )

[topping] sprinkles, [extra] pocky, [challenge] chocolate, [challenge] strawberry, [inactive-author] bookblather, [challenge] vanilla

Comments 20

darkfaerieclaw March 2 2010, 08:22:58 UTC

Wow, Yvonne's a bitch.

This really made my heart ache for Hugh. That's a pretty shitty way to find out your daughter isn't biologically yours.

You do a really great job of packing a lot of stuff into a tiny word limit and making it fabulous. Great job with this.

bookblather March 5 2010, 07:58:41 UTC

She um. Kind of is, yeah. And she really, really wants to hurt him, so I guess she succeeded. Thanks so much for reading and your compliments!

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bookblather March 5 2010, 07:59:25 UTC

I made Hugh to suffer. He must really hate me. :D I'm glad it helped you through something! Thanks for reading, and for your compliments.

sarcasticsra March 2 2010, 21:12:23 UTC

Ugh, Yvonne, I do not like you. This is great. Poor Hugh.

bookblather March 5 2010, 07:59:43 UTC

She's not the most likeable person in the world, no. Thank you so much!

perfectisafault March 2 2010, 21:29:17 UTC

First off, I really like the present tense here. It makes it very immediate :)

Next, Yvonne is a bitch. Ughhhhh >:(
But great job conveying her bitchiness :D

bookblather March 5 2010, 08:00:32 UTC

Thank you! I hope to convey her bitchiness more in some hot fudge pieces in the future (because she and Ivy's douchebag biodad are my only real villains). I'm glad you enjoyed it!

kusarinokokoro March 2 2010, 22:07:40 UTC

I'm totally reading this whole thing backwards, but now everything is starting to make more sense!
This deserves a sad icon. And Yvonne deserves a bitch slap.

EDITED CAUSE "YOU ARE SO GORGEOUS" IS NOT SAD.

bookblather March 5 2010, 08:01:28 UTC

*sporfles a little bit*

Yeeeeah you kind of need to read this one before I Know This Much Is True. And she does need a bitchslap, but alas, she doesn't get one. At least not from Hugh. Perhaps from karma. *ponders* Thanks so much for reading!