Vanilla 23, chocolate 20, strawberry 22: Stage Fright

[bookblather]

Title: Stage Fright
Main Story: In the HeartFlavors and Toppings: Vanilla 23 (music/dancing/singing), chocolate 20 (caution), strawberry 22 (flowers), cherry on top (present tense and some stylistic things

Comments

[bookblather]

Well, it's all the people who do see that video that makes life a great deal better for her, so in a sense, it's a good thing.

Cryptic enough for ya? :D

Seriously, thank you so much!

[theoryoferin]

I love the end of this! Very sweet. [:

[bookblather]

Thank you very much! Olivia and Jake have a good thing going, don't they?

[darkfaerieclaw]

This entire piece is amazing, and very lyrical, especially starting in the seventh paragraph on. I love the emotion behind this, and the word choices are very good. I really like this, and it's almost pointless to say this because I look forward to everything of yours, but - I'm definitely looking forward to more things with Olivia. <3

[bookblather]

Eee, thank you so much! There will be much more Olivia in the near future (especially if I'm going to do that pocky chain that I want to because otherwise no one will get it). Next up is how she got together with Jake, I think. Anyway. Thank you so much for your compliments! Your comments always make me joyful.

[bookblather]

I'm glad you didn't think it was cliche! Olivia is very insecure, but she does have some very good reasons for it, so I'm glad that it worked. Thanks so much!

Also, percussive maintenance is what we call it in my family. :D

[bookblather]

Just you wait until the Story of Run-On Sentence Doom gets posted. *grin* I'm glad that you enjoyed it! There will be much more Olivia very soon.