Honeydew # 26, "Public Relations"

Oct 30, 2008 21:56

Title: Damaging Accusations
Word Count: 446
Toppings: Cherry
Ratings: PG
Summary: Barrick's boss gets a call from one irate sister.
Author's notes:You know, I love class breaks. I can use that wonderful fifteen minutes to hurriedly write the skeletons of stories. ^^ I gave myself a cherry for my first phone conversation dialogue. It originally ( Read more... )

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sylvrilyn October 31 2008, 16:12:50 UTC
Ouch. It's so true. That's the kind of accusation that you can never fully leave behind once it's been made, no matter how far from the truth it is. *hugs Barrick*

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kage_ankoku October 31 2008, 16:33:31 UTC
It'll scar Barrick forever, that's for sure. This is what happens when the government is out to get your family.

Thanks for reading! :D

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slysionnachnano November 2 2008, 20:32:21 UTC
Barrick! No!

Poor family. Great job.

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kage_ankoku November 2 2008, 22:12:38 UTC
I do too many terrible things to this family. Thank you. :D

Thank you for reading!

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shayna611 November 2 2008, 22:41:33 UTC
poor, poor Barrick. There is just no living that one down...

I think the conversation flowed quite nicely :)

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kage_ankoku November 2 2008, 22:47:56 UTC
As Rika said, it'll break his heart.

Thank you! You should have seen the first time I wrote it. This version is much better. =P

Are you feeling better? =D

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shayna611 November 2 2008, 23:01:10 UTC
getting there, thanks :)

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kage_ankoku November 2 2008, 23:02:42 UTC
Good, I'm glad you're getting there. =D

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pirate_mousie November 5 2008, 05:09:50 UTC
[Duex: O.O *incoherent* I--kill--what--who--death!]

That's... about how I feel, too. Those bastards!

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kage_ankoku November 5 2008, 05:13:13 UTC
This was one of the things that made me burst into tears when it first wove its way into my brain. I felt so incredibly bad for it.

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pirate_mousie November 5 2008, 05:24:51 UTC
Ah man. I know what you mean.

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kage_ankoku November 5 2008, 05:26:08 UTC
And to think, this is only one of the things that made me cry. *sighs* I've got a couple more to go.

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