(Untitled)

[shayna611]

Elderberry #30. Stream of Life with Hot Fudge and Whipped Cream
Story : knights
Rating : G
Timeframe : 1251
Word Count : 965

Adding to the necromancer cast again. Not sure where I'm going with this lady, but wind didn't really seem to be an area of expertise for any of the existing crew, and I felt like playing with it.

Comments

[slysionnachnano]

...pie? Hmm...I wonder what Reida was asking ;) Of course, he's not gonna be sharing any pie with her!

I love the explanations of magic. Seriously, your magic is one of my favorite parts. Super awesome.

Favorite line:
“Wind has worthwhile uses, you know. Light, sound,” she shrugged, “wind.”

[shayna611]

hahaha, she so wishes he would...

Thank you! :)

[theoryoferin]

seconding the magic being superbly awesome!

[shayna611]

Thank you! :)

[dragons_kin]

you did a really good job setting up all the different characters and the scene. I could see all of the students. And the teacher walking around the room talking to her students. Your imagery is very good.

[shayna611]

Thank you very much :)

[fachefaucheux]

Seconding that the magic was well described and acted out in this piece. Peacock lady is a good addition to the cast of teachers too. ^^

...I wonder if we're ever going to see who Celis ended up in...

[shayna611]

Thank you! :)

I'm not sure what other uses I'll have for her, but I like expanding the cast.

Actually, yes you will! I'm still pinning down the character, but I know where it fits in now. :)

[hi_falootin]

wait, I was supposed to read this first, wasn't I? Eep!

Loved the divination magic! And the new teacher seems potentially interesting-a bit different from the others at least...

[shayna611]

yeah, this one spawned the other. I wrote this and went uh oh, Reida needs to serve him pie now...

I will have to find more to do with her, but not sure yet what

Thanks :)