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Sangria & Creamsicle in Persia

Nov 20, 2009 22:36

Author: Dralore
Challenge: Sangria #27 - From the ashes a fire shall be woken; Creamsicle #6 - beauty
Topping: Pocky
Word Count: 83
Rating: G
Story: Persia AU; Lorena & Xander
Summary: A promise.
Note: Goes with this entry.

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[challenge] sangria, [challenge] creamsicle, [extra] pocky, [inactive-author] dralore

Comments 4

ichthusfish November 21 2009, 03:56:25 UTC

Good use of imagery in this one. I think I agree with Xander about Lorena sounding like an avenging goddess. Wouldn't like the be the one who gets in her way :)

draloreshimare November 21 2009, 04:05:13 UTC

Thanks. :) It was surprising (for me), since she doesn't usually show that steel underneath.

shayna611 November 21 2009, 04:42:14 UTC

lovely language :)

I'd like to see where this is leading

draloreshimare November 21 2009, 04:55:36 UTC

Thanks.

I. Hum. Wrote myself into a weird corner, actually. So, we'll see.