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Nov 19, 2009 23:55

FotD 11/19/09 - Obfuscate with Hot Fudge and Whipped Cream
Story : knights
Rating : G
Timeframe : 1244
Word Count : 702
Word of the Day : Obfuscate - to darken or render indistinct or dim; to make obscure or difficult to understand or make sense of; to confuse or bewilder.
[Sethan's age has been adjusted and may not match some comments]

Berwyk, Sethan and mind games )

[topping] whipped cream, [topping] hot fudge, [author] shayna, [challenge] flavor of the day

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hi_falootin November 20 2009, 06:23:32 UTC
nice! kid Sethan is kinda creepy in his precociousness :O

I like how he handled things though...even if he is getting help from the voice in his head.

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shayna611 November 20 2009, 06:26:39 UTC
Thanks! :)

The voice in his head is probably fuming right about now ;)

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ichthusfish November 22 2009, 02:18:49 UTC
ROTFLMAO!!!

Fab! I love sneaky 7 year old Sethan. He's as much fun as his older, creepier self :)

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shayna611 November 22 2009, 02:30:30 UTC
Thank you! :)

He's just as much fun to write.

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fachefaucheux December 22 2009, 15:49:00 UTC
Lol, yes, creepily intelligent little Sethan is quite creepy. But that's how we like him, be he young or old. ^^

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shayna611 December 22 2009, 17:11:03 UTC
he's fun that way. Thanks! :)

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slysionnachnano January 7 2010, 19:26:50 UTC
Kid Sethan = win. On all accounts. Poor Berwyk has no clue what he got himself into...

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shayna611 January 7 2010, 20:45:41 UTC
haha sympathy for Berwyk. nothing like a small child that's brighter than you, huh?

Thank you! :)

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