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Nov 08, 2009 00:17

Mocha #6. Make My Day
Story : knights
Rating : G
Timeframe : 1254
Word Count : 1173

Ski and Rune and fairy tales )

[author] shayna, [challenge] mocha

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hi_falootin November 8 2009, 09:25:01 UTC
ahh, very sweet and awesome discussion ♥ Lots of great lines in this one. I especially liked: “And how,” she said, drawing herself back up away from the book, “is that any less a work of fiction? At least mine has dragons.” And of course, the end.

This probably shouldn't come as a surprise to me since I liked the Rune/Ski brownies, but I really like the dynamic between these two.

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shayna611 November 8 2009, 15:50:52 UTC
Thank you! :)

I had fun with this one! I like it when Ski lightens up a bit. I feel bad sometimes that I haven't done much build up to the whole Rune/Ski thing (this of course is before it) That whole first year is really pretty sparse.

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shayna611 November 9 2009, 18:24:06 UTC
Thank you! :)

The simple pleasures are always the best. :)

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fachefaucheux November 9 2009, 21:21:37 UTC
Ah, this piece has a nice, calm domestic feel to it that I like. And Rune's awkwardness. Always gotta love the awkward. :D

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shayna611 November 9 2009, 22:44:43 UTC
Thank you! :)

poor Rune, always doomed to awkwardness

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ichthusfish November 10 2009, 00:50:49 UTC
That was really sweet! And I love that Ski wants to be the one fighting to dragon to rescue her prince, not the other way around. And I guess, in a way, Rune does get his wish :)

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shayna611 November 10 2009, 02:42:05 UTC
Thank you! :)

Can you see Ski sitting in a tower? And yes, he does, for awhile anyway :)

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slysionnachnano December 2 2009, 20:43:42 UTC
Aww, that was cute! The last line was great.

You know, I wouldn't want Terrel eaten by a dragon. You'd kill the dragon with whatever diseases he carries.

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shayna611 December 2 2009, 22:08:38 UTC
Thank you! :)

I'm sorry, Mr Dragon, you seem to have herpes...in your intestines...

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