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[iamintroversion]

Author:  Indie
Title: “letters to a misshape” ( index)
Challenge(s): Marshmallow #13 (a good deed), Honeydew #24 (countdown)
Extra(s)/Topping(s): Pocky. 
Rating: G
Story: Rylie writes Nolan a letter in her head.
Word count: 100
Author’s Note: It was SO hard to whittle this down to 100 words!!
Summary: "A letter to a misshape . . ." Rylie was composing

Comments

[ichthusfish]

Awww... that was so bitter-sweet. Congrats on getting it into 100 words :)

[iamintroversion]

Haha everything Rylie's involved in is bitter sweet. She can't even have a pleasant whipped cream. XD Thanks for reading! & It was like pulling teeth! XD I'm glad it turned out okay.

[perfectisafault]

Aww...such a little pocky with so much feeling :(

[iamintroversion]

Thanks! :D The original was around 140 words, so I literally had to cut out almost every third word. I'm not sure which I like better.

[iamintroversion]

Thank you thank you! :) I was worried with the cut (from 140 words to 100) it would lose the best parts of the emotion, but I'm glad you liked. ^.^

[hi_falootin]

aw, nice little pocky :)

[iamintroversion]

:) Thanks. Pocky-ers now have so much more respect from me! Whew!

[dori_liv]

thats really nice.

hard to keep to 100 words as well

Rylie seems to have self destructive tendencies. I can relate to that.

the last part 'I'm sorry I left you lonely' really makes me feel bad for Nolan, but also shows what Rylies state of mind is

[iamintroversion]

Thanks so much! Rylie has trouble deciding what she wants, and what kind of person she wants to be, and sometimes the person she wants to be wants to make her miserable. I'm sorry you can relate. :-/