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thequeen451 in runaway_tales

Chocolate # 26 - Nostalgia

Oct 07, 2009 09:58

Flavor: Chocolate [#26 nostalgia]

Rating: PG13 [for a child’s recollection of mature experiences]

Title: Bitter Medicine for a Nonexistent Sickness

Author: Queen451

Summary: The memories are bleak and vivid, surround-sound and fantastic. They are not merely memories for the Sparrow King, they are life times. They are moments. They are feelings and ( Read more... )

[challenge] chocolate

Comments 3

draloreshimare October 7 2009, 03:48:07 UTC

I feel like I should be able to understand this...but I don't. And I really want to! XD

thequeen451 October 7 2009, 05:47:54 UTC

XD Does that mean it sucks?? o.o very confusing, I know. Ask me questions! Maybe that'll help... *mental note: Post MaShu characters list sometime in the near month*

draloreshimare October 7 2009, 19:33:32 UTC

It doesn't suck, it's just...a more abstract writing style combined with an unfamiliar world & characters. So, it's confusing. I'm not sure exactly what is thought, and if they're thoughts, if they're the Sparrow King's, although the flashbacks are pretty clearly delineated.

I think a "cast list" would help, but also some background information on the world. Or, perhaps, starting at the beginning?...Perhaps writing some "character pieces"...?