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[shayna611]

Flavor of the Day - 10/5/08 - Rubicund with POCKY
Rating : PG
Timeframe : early 1260's
Word Count : 78

Pip inspired me to do some poetry too. I think the FOTD today just calls for it.
Poetry is not my thing, but I've already taken to cherries for it, so no more for me.

Comments

[slysionnachnano]

Wow, this was really haunting. I love it.

Write more poetry,

[shayna611]

thanks :)

maybe I'll try. I have to be inspired for poetry, I can't force it as easily as prose.

[slysionnachnano]

I can't force it at all. Poetry and me hate each other.

[shayna611]

I dare you to write a red poem too ;)

[kage_ankoku]

I have to agree with Sly; this is haunting. But it is wonderful! And I love it. <3

You're really good at poetry! Great job. =3

[shayna611]

thanks :)

[purpleinkpen]

Oooooh... It's sexy and violent! Yay!

[shayna611]

thanks :)

[shayna611]

thank you :)

[nathskywalker]

Very powerful. I love how you use red in so many different ways and say so much in so few words. And my skilled poetry eye picks up hints at sex ;)

[shayna611]

Thank you :)

it's about Lyssa...from Rune... of course it's about sex ;)

[nathskywalker]

All the red made me think this had to be about Lyssa.