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[shayna611]

Mocha #12. What I Wouldn't Give... with Hot Fudge and Whipped Cream
Story : knights
Rating : G
Timeframe : 1249
Word Count : 722

Comments

[hi_falootin]

ahh, yes...Reida's been interested in those books for a while, huh?

Striking description of the newcomers! And Aldo and Kinu amuse me, as always. I also liked the description of Reida towards the beginning..."underdeveloped contours" XD very nice.

[shayna611]

Thanks! :)

Yes, always the books for her.You know, the main reason I did this was for the Aldo & Kinu bits. Took me awhile because I had to figure out what else to bother with.

I'm actually wondering now when she does develop, because I don't think grown Reida is all that flat (of course they're only about 14-15 here) So I'm guessing she'll be doing like I was, in her very late teens going 'where did these come from? And why weren't they here a few years ago?'

[nathskywalker]

I'm sure the boys will start paying closer attention to Reida soon. And she will be paying attention to those books.

[shayna611]

you know, I don't think I have anything with anyone paying that sort of attention to Reida - she scares people too much

thanks :)

[fachefaucheux]

Ahah, I loved the scuffle in there between Aldo and Kinu. Dude with the sword does sound like one tough customer...

And somehow, even when he's not the focus, Kairn has to nearly be startled into bodily harm, doesn't he? XD

[shayna611]

Thanks :)

You've met dude with the sword (Hakaro) and I hadn't even realized what I was doing to Kairn - it just happens I guess!