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Aug 22, 2009 00:04

Maple Walnut #23. Two Left Feet and Flavor of the Day - 08/21/09 - Stultify
with Hot Fudge and Whipped Cream
Story : knights
Rating : PG
Timeframe : 1249
Word Count : 1305
Word of the Day : Stultify - to cause to appear stupid, inconsistent, or ridiculous

( introducing some new necromancers )

[topping] whipped cream, [challenge] maple walnut, [topping] hot fudge, [author] shayna, [challenge] flavor of the day

Comments 10

ichthusfish August 23 2009, 01:43:49 UTC

LOL! I like Wilifred in a 'might be entertaining to watch' sort of way, but I think his aprentice is about to become somewhat less pretty and clean. Interesting idea to stock a demon with explosive. I'm sure Sethan (or even Reida) could find a use for that one. Making it easy to 'destroy' could also work well :)

By the way, I think you mean ears here. This sounds rather painful: had his fingers forcibly crammed in his eyes and one eye pressed shut.

shayna611 August 23 2009, 02:59:43 UTC

Thanks! :)

I shall have to develop him and the kid a bit more. I fear the boy is not going to have a good time with Aldo and friends at all.

and yes, yes I did, midnight brain fart, will fix, thanks :)

hi_falootin August 23 2009, 04:25:51 UTC

Fantastic descriptions of Wilifred fumbling around with the bones XD I can totally see why they'd find that amusing. And I loved this line: Kairn eyed the shuffling collection of bones and decided he’d rather not be anywhere near it if someone did sneeze on it, just so as not to be caught beneath the wreckage. And of course, the eventual outcome. Aldo so totally deserved that.

Though Reida's line at the end was my favorite :)

shayna611 August 23 2009, 04:39:38 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

jmlowrey August 24 2009, 01:22:27 UTC

Bones packed with explosives, I rather like the sound of that.

It's always amusing when the people getting laughed at manage to get even, and the last laugh. ^_^

shayna611 August 24 2009, 18:17:50 UTC

Thank you! :)

slysionnachnano August 26 2009, 12:45:57 UTC

Very awesome idea, Wilifred. Jeeze, even his name is all flop-ish.

I liked the explosions. I do hope that Sethan uses them to his advantage...

shayna611 September 1 2009, 15:41:15 UTC

hehe, I tried to find him a flop-ish name, glad that worked ;)

I don't really see explosions being Sethan's thing, but I'm sure there will be more of them.

thanks :)

fachefaucheux August 31 2009, 22:56:50 UTC

Oh man, loser nobles. Boy, do I love loser fashionista nobles. 8D And it looks like these two certainly will not disappoint.

I do wonder exactly how bad things are going to go for that poor, beleaguered assistant, though...

shayna611 September 1 2009, 15:41:46 UTC

Thank you! :)

I shall have to try to find more to do with them