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Aug 12, 2009 22:32

Mocha #10. Mind Your Own Business with Hot Fudge and Whipped Cream
Story : knights
Rating : PG
Timeframe : 1251
Word Count : 875

On to Mocha! So far it seems to be Reida's flavor.

Reida and the men in her life )

[topping] whipped cream, [topping] hot fudge, [author] shayna, [challenge] mocha

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nathskywalker August 13 2009, 17:38:16 UTC
o.O

WOW!

Reida has a HUGE crush on Sethan if she's willing to go through all that trouble just to get a book for him, doesn't she? ;)

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shayna611 August 13 2009, 17:50:41 UTC
she does, but it's actually at least as much about the book itself and what she and Sethan can get out of it as it is about Sethan.

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jmlowrey August 13 2009, 17:59:49 UTC
Ephram sounds like a very creepy person. To say the least.

And like Reida said, some books are worth it.

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shayna611 August 13 2009, 18:03:05 UTC
He is. You get into a field like necromancy, I suppose you're bound to meet a few ;)

And yes, secret magic books? May well be worth the abuse.

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fachefaucheux August 13 2009, 22:16:20 UTC
I'm beginning to see where Reida's coming a little more...I like how she can be manage to be manhandled, and then just move directly on to messing with Kairn. Makes her character more interesting.

I wonder how much Sethan knows about having her wrapped around his little finger...knowing him, probably too much.

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shayna611 August 14 2009, 01:20:04 UTC
Thanks :)

Hey, messing with Kairn brightens one's day. Everyone should try it.

You know, I think Reida's attentions get to him. I'm sure he takes as much advantage as he can. But she's almost as manipulative as he is, so that's kind of dangerous.

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ichthusfish August 14 2009, 00:33:10 UTC
Ooohh! Interesting! Ok, first, someone needs to do something drastic to Master Ephram. The guy needs sorting out lol! I don't believe for a second Sethan is as innocent and oblivious as he's behaving here. He's probably quite enjoying the game. And poor Kairn... everyone messes with Kairn's head lol! Nice character insight, for all of them :)

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shayna611 August 14 2009, 01:15:18 UTC
Thank you! :)

First off, don't worry, Master Ephram will take care of Master Ephram. Though I'm sure he takes full advantage of her devotion, I think Sethan would probably rather have Reida's paws off of him. And who could resist messing with Kairn?

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hi_falootin August 17 2009, 04:04:00 UTC
so I don't feel bad for Ephram anymore ;) I love how Reida kind of takes the abuse in stride and turns Kairn's concern around on him like that.

I liked this moment: For a breath, their fingers touched, and she tucked her lip between her teeth. Oh, Reida...

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shayna611 August 17 2009, 04:25:51 UTC
Ephram definitely got what was coming to him. And it was fun making Reida sympathetic for a moment, not that she'd accept any of it ;)

Thanks! :)

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