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Sep 27, 2008 01:03

Rocky Road #23. A Grave with Sprinkles, POCKY, and MALT
Rating : G
Timeframe : mid-late 1260's
Word Count 100
Malt Prompt : Prompts from a hat - a grave, Lonna, the bare necessities

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[topping] sprinkles, [challenge] rocky road, [extra] malt, [extra] pocky, [author] shayna

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maiden_rising September 27 2008, 16:14:51 UTC
I love the line, "She is not even there," as well as his terse response. Intriguing!

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shayna611 September 27 2008, 18:52:10 UTC
thank you :)

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hi_falootin September 27 2008, 17:31:23 UTC
ooh, excellent pocky. I really liked the first sentence! And the phrase "lousy hunk of rock."

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shayna611 September 27 2008, 18:52:27 UTC
thanks :)

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slysionnachnano September 27 2008, 20:52:49 UTC
These two together...they've interested me.

Great job, as always!

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shayna611 September 27 2008, 20:54:41 UTC
me too, it's a whole new development... might affect things politically later on

thank you :)

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slysionnachnano September 27 2008, 20:59:24 UTC
Oou political issues. YAY!

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shayna611 September 27 2008, 21:15:49 UTC
Terrel and Dalton have never been especially keen on each other, I don't think an affair will help that ;)

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mpiper September 28 2008, 03:23:36 UTC
All of your pieces with Dalton post-Ilya: Very well done, Very good at drawing the emotions and with such little ink too.
You do pain very well dear.

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shayna611 September 28 2008, 03:26:00 UTC
thank you dear :)

I need to give Dalton some happiness, I think

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kage_ankoku September 28 2008, 19:16:45 UTC
I love the exchange between the two of them in this piece. Very nicely written! x3

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shayna611 September 28 2008, 19:34:19 UTC
thank you :)

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