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Mods' Pocky Challenge - Round 15

Jun 15, 2009 17:22

Cookies & Cream # 13. Hold with Whipped Cream and Pocky
Story : knights
Rating : G
Timeframe : 1250
Word Count : 100

( Lyssa's new toy )

[challenge] cookies n cream, [topping] whipped cream, [extra] pocky, [author] shayna

Comments 15

ichthusfish June 15 2009, 22:58:58 UTC

Perfect pocky. I could see Lyssa in this. Nicely done :)

shayna611 June 15 2009, 23:11:50 UTC

thank you! :)

fachefaucheux June 15 2009, 23:19:54 UTC

I was wondering what the toy would be...sword is definitely fitting for her.

shayna611 June 15 2009, 23:27:50 UTC

she's about 14 here, she's wanted one of those suckers for years ;)

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shayna611 June 15 2009, 23:46:11 UTC

thanks! :)

slysionnachnano June 15 2009, 23:49:57 UTC

So, I think Lyssa is truly evil and ends up taking over the world due to her love of swords and sex. Yes?

In seriousness, great pocky! The description was fantastic.

shayna611 June 15 2009, 23:55:07 UTC

What does Lyssa want with the world? Give her swords and sex and she is happy! :)

thanks! :)

hi_falootin June 16 2009, 00:11:23 UTC

lovely descriptions! don't think I'd be so bold to test that sucker with my finger, but I'd have been surprised if Lyssa didn't ;)

shayna611 June 16 2009, 13:09:08 UTC

Thank you! :)