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bitty1721 in runaway_tales

Peekaboo?

May 19, 2009 12:02

Author: Bitz
Piece Title: Peekaboo?
Rating: G
Challenge: Rocky Road: attic- #8, Cotton Candy: Peekaboo- #19, Chocolate: Caution-#20
Topping/Extra: Pocky
Story: Abandoned Hearts
Word Count: 94
Summary: Phoenix (Firebird) and Mickey find a rat in the attic

( Dust trails followed my feet... )

[challenge] rocky road, [challenge] cotton candy, [author] bitz, [extra] pocky, [challenge] chocolate

Comments 6

perfectisafault May 19 2009, 19:47:24 UTC

Oh God...I had a dream about rats a few nights ago. It was really scary D:
Nice Pocky! I really like it :)

nathskywalker May 19 2009, 20:06:31 UTC

Now I know what inspired Jacqueline's nightmare ;)

perfectisafault May 19 2009, 20:08:33 UTC

lolol i know :p
I was trying to think of something nightmare-ish, and i thought of my dream about rats xD

nathskywalker May 19 2009, 20:07:07 UTC

Nice pocky. The last line made me smile :)

bitty1721 May 19 2009, 20:34:05 UTC

Thanks guys! I was trying to make sure I had just enough words. Might just put this in the regular story.

hi_falootin May 20 2009, 05:43:05 UTC

cute last line! :)