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kusarinokokoro May 13 2009, 22:40:44 UTC
This. Was. FABULOUS.
Seriously.
I think you're better at the description of the whole hand-holding thing than I am :]
Has a fun hat!

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hi_falootin May 13 2009, 22:43:43 UTC
thank you, bb! I'm glad you liked \o/ I had a bunch of fun writing this!
ETF dumb typo XD

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vivian_marie May 13 2009, 23:48:37 UTC
Very nice!!

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hi_falootin May 14 2009, 03:17:38 UTC
thank you! :)

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perfectisafault May 14 2009, 02:23:10 UTC
I love this! I loved the way you described all of Sergei's emotions, especially when he takes the gun in his hand. Awesome :)

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hi_falootin May 14 2009, 03:17:57 UTC
aw, thank you! Glad you liked :D

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fachefaucheux May 14 2009, 02:40:15 UTC
I loved all the continued references to the gun, how Sergei keeps feeling it all the way to the end of the piece. Mmm, hand holding never was written out so well... :D

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hi_falootin May 14 2009, 03:19:31 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the hand holding...that was probably the part of this that came easiest to me lol :D

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kunenk May 14 2009, 14:50:04 UTC
Oh, lovely.

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