Alright fordaexings

[madelyn93]

Title: Alright
For: daexings
Pairing: Main: Jongin/Junmyeon, Side: Baekhyun/Chanyeol
Rating: PG-13
Length: 9K
Summary, potential warnings: Junmyeon isn’t a bad boyfriend but lies are sometimes easier to live with than the truth.

Comments

[mebeforeyou]

SCREAMS SUKAI SCREAMS I AM SO EXCITED TO READ THANK YOU SOB

[mebeforeyou]

i am the worst at leaving comments but i will try my best only only for you lol

☆SUKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAI☆ throws myself at you because you wrote my favorite ship!! ;~~; and you put in baekyeol too!!

Jongin reminds himself of this simple lie as he sits alone at the kitchen table, facing two plates of cold pasta and the candles that had been spent as the hours of the evening passed. He doesn’t feel a single hint of sadness in his body. In the years spent living with his boyfriend, he’s seen this picture so many times before that he’s become accustomed to it

why is it so heartbreaking already-- not that i'm complaining because i ♥love♥ heartbreaking things lol bUT STILL I SOB AT YOU ;~~~;

A thump on the floor and Jongin notices he'd knocked over the toothbrush cup onto the floor. Their cup. Jongin looks down and sees his bright red toothbrush laying alone on the tiles. Just like it's owner; alone.

screams i love how you wrote this, ouch

Jongin guesses wrong on purpose and Junmyeon feels a proud moment when he pulls out his bouquet

[mebeforeyou]

"Junmyeon, I-" Jongin begins, but his words don't come out fast enough and he’s cut off as Junmyeon shoves past him down the hallway. "Who was that?"

this hurt me in all the bad and good ways and i don't even know but jongin is trying and trying so hard but joonmyun just ;~~~; heartbreaking really just how i like it because i'm such a masochist um

"Just good?" Baekhyun mocks him as a kettle starts to whistle. "He can't be just good. Chanyeol's morning breath is just good. Wait, let me take that back - that was supposed to be insulting."

baekhyun pls u______________u hits him u__________u lmfao

"This is stupid," Junmyeon's voice is angry, and if it already wasn’t, slowly becoming it. "There are better things I can be doing on a Saturday night."

jOONMYUN IS SO COOOOOOOOLD but jongin is so fragile in here sobs i love it. and the baekyeol is really sweet too gaaaah u_____u

“Too long.” Jongin rubs at his eyes and settles onto the couch with fingers pressed into his temples. “I don’t know if he even loves me still.”chokes on my tears

[loudestoflove]

oh this was so sad at the beginning!! you really captured jongin's loneliness well, and the little confrontation with joonmyun in the hall was so heartbreaking. i liked the way that you used chanyeol and baekhyun's happy relationship and jongin's own comparisons to highlight just how much jongin and joonmyun's relationship had degraded from what it used to be. it was so heartbreaking to find out that it was joonmyun's suffering that was causing him to lash out, and how poorly he was handling it. and that ending was so satisfying!! jongin finally breaking through to joonmyun to try to fix things.

[yeolie]

"he’s soon facing the image of a man in his late twenties, trying so hard to be eighteen once more."
I loved this line

I also liked his reluctance to let his friends know what was rly up.
Like if he admits it it'll be real?
u_u

Alssssooooo, I loved the bkyl.
>3
I thought they were really insensitive at first like omg, but when you revealed they knew sth was wrong all along I was like WOW okay.
they were actually being sensitive in their own way
Man suho's still an asshole tho

ALSO chanyeol would give him a flirtini, that mojito drinkin bitch

I like the way this turned out :3

[snowingseoul]

SUKAI OHMYGOD BEAUTIFUL SUKAI
AND CHANBAEK TOO
im in tiny pieces on the ground
BUT THANK YOU FOR THE HAPPY ENDING
I THOUGHT JOONMYEON WAS GOING TO LEAVE