Insomnia, for donawhalee

[chiharu]

Title: Insomnia
For: donawhalee
Pairing: Lu Han-centric, Lu Han/Lay, mention Kris/Lay, Jongin/Kyungsoo, Jongin/Lu Han, Sehun/Lu Han, Minseok/Lu Han.
Rating: R
Length: 6k
Summary, potential warnings: AU - Lu Han goes through his days thinking Yixing is made for him. In reality, his moments are just part of a dream. (mention of sexual situations,

Comments

[chiharu]

:OOOOOO This was really interesting and artfully done. I was getting seriously worried about Lu Han ala Will Graham in Hannibal, but I'm glad everything worked out!

[tyreling]

Thank you for reading!

[donawhalee]

this is really good ;~; I really didn't expect this plot at all>~<

I really like all the different relationships in the parallel worlds you included in the fic(a fucking blowjob from sehunahjwhdwskh and a fluffy kiss in the elevator;~;) and how it always morph into a scenario with yixing. it was heartbreaking to see how luhan desperately wanted a place where he and yixing could have the happy ending he wanted. one-sided love everywhere whyyyyyy????? Gosh all the rejections was so sad;~;

and how could you;~; so many pairings askjahd there isn't enough space in my kokoro for them all;~; I'm really glad luhan got his happy ending and sobs xiuhan is my secret otp asdfghjkl( i thought it was going to be a unrequited love for minseok;~; thank god it wasn't).

Thank you so much for writing this;~; /sprinkles u with love;

[tyreling]

Hi there~ thank you for braving the story. I really apologize for the disjointed nature. ;;;;

The whole heartbreaking one sided loves was necessary since Yixing can not love Lu Han the way Lu Han wants him to. ;A; I'm so sorry /patches your heart aches.

I admit the xiuhan scenes and the layhan scenes were the ones that came first and then I snooped around in your lj and found out you also like writing hunhan and sometimes lukai too but with kaisoo somewhere. I basically have no problems with your many ships and decided to add those as well cuz omg lu han is so shippable with everyone even if he only wants Yixing. T_T (it was going to be unrequited Xiuhan at first but then my heart couldn't handle the ending so botched up so I worked into a possible xiuhan ending)

Thank you for the prompts~! I'm glad you liked the story.

[beastlyshine]

I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT JUST HAPPENED

[tyreling]

;;;A;;; I'm sorry for the confusion. The majority of the fic takes place in Lu Han's dreams . The second half is when he's awake.

[loudestoflove]

this was really nice, esp the way that it was structured!! the way that even in his dreams, lu han just keeps seeking yixing, everything just keeps coming back to yixing, even when he doesn't mean for them to. and then when he woke up, i really liked how you didn't portray yixing or kris as a villain, even if lu han wishes he could think of them like that, and how minseok was there to hold him up when he needed it, and let him come to him. it was such a nice, sweet ending.

[tyreling]

Thank you for reading this!

[zhonqda]

this is very interesting.. I don't read layhan pairing at all [like congrats gurl this is my first time reading layhan pairing all the cherries for you] but then because it's you and I love you I read through this thing, gotten mad confused and then I just feel so sorry for lu han odg. But I am glad that at the end of his dreams he gotten to his own happy ending and that minseok has always been there, even from the beginning till the end. it still feels so bittersweet to me because all luhan has been reaching for is yixing and he still fails to get yixing in the end, but then there's m i n s e o k, ever patiently caring minseok and it wraps up all so beautifully. ;u; love, love this.

[tyreling]

Thank you for reading and braving the story, hon~!

;A;