Give me a star (or stardust, if you will), For seulpeo

Jul 09, 2013 17:35

Title: give me a star (or stardust, if you will)
For: seulpeo
Pairing: Luhan/Kai
Rating: pg-13
Length: 10.6k
Summary, potential warnings: When Jongin was a child, he dreamt of dreams; when reality came crashing down on him, he dreamt of revenge; when he began solving crime, he dreamt of justice; now, when he’s with Lu Han, he dreams of love and a happy ( Read more... )

postings, summer 2013

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tyreling July 9 2013, 17:43:31 UTC
OMGgggggg this is really good! But it was sad theycouldn't actually save each other. Soin a way lu han was investigating jongin ad met kai. And what do you mean bad fic, this is really good. I did have my suspicions when jongin saw his strange reflection and the bloodied knuckles. Overall great work!

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pleaseuu July 21 2013, 15:13:44 UTC
thank you ;-; it was a really stressful 2 months to write this because it was a genre i have never touched before. i'm glad you liked it though! :)

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dinodays July 10 2013, 04:06:06 UTC
I am literally actually tearing up at the end of this. Please excuse me while I go eat a tub of ice cream because noooooooooo

I kind of guessed it would be either Luhan or Jongin from the note at the beginning, but I couldn't figure out how. And then Jongin started having headaches and weird dreams and I was like oooooooooooh okay :(((((((( Luhan wanting to protect and save Jongin is so precious. His inability to save him was heartbreaking. Good job!

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pleaseuu July 21 2013, 15:18:29 UTC
/pats

thanks for reading and liking it though asdfghjkl hugs <3

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bictory July 10 2013, 11:26:42 UTC
this fic was so good, I had to go back to the beginning and sit on a lot of the parts, I love the way you incorporated the star story, the parallel was really nice! I love how different the views Luhan and Jongin have are. I like reading Jongin POV fics cause he's pretty quiet/dark/introspective but he also loves deeply. I don't even know what I'm saying so just thanks for writing a good sad fic! It's ok when happy fic isn't that great but when sad fic is bad that sucks so you should know this isn't badly written at all!! ♥

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pleaseuu July 21 2013, 15:21:53 UTC
It's ok when happy fic isn't that great but when sad fic is bad that sucks so you should know this isn't badly written at all!!

did you know that line made my whole day and i couldn't stop smiling ;-; i was very much cheered up by that. thank you for liking it though! the star story was a last-minute thing that i incorporated at the last minute heh but it made the story like a million times better so yay!

but yup, jongin isn't the type to show his love in public a lot but the quiet ones are the ones who has the most love buried inside!

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seulpeo July 11 2013, 07:15:22 UTC
10K OH MY GOD SPOT ;______; I PROMISE I WILL BE BACK

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seulpeo July 15 2013, 13:15:34 UTC
hi!!!! thank you for writing for me!!!!! n______n

huhu im not the best at writing suspenseful more action or mystery-like fics so im really glad that you write one for me especially with my favorite jongin otp :3
a few things that i especially liked was the seeking justice instead of revenge and how lu han was jongin nightmare catcher(!!) and of course all the star imagery, that was really nice ;_; and i kind of knew all along that jongin would be kai/the killer but you know how you just hope beyond hope that the main character isnt :'(

thank you~ thank you writer-chan~~~~ ;A;

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pleaseuu July 21 2013, 15:24:21 UTC
ok i sooo didn't know you liked lukai, but just stood out to me and asdfghjkl

i'm sorry this was really badly written /whimpers/ but i'm just glad you're not throwing rotten tomatoes at me!!

thank you for providing me with the wonderful prompts ♥

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seulpeo July 21 2013, 21:13:44 UTC
lukai are my favorites from m and k so clearly lukai is the way to go :'( im glad they presented themselves to you well hehe

im really glad you found my prompts inspiring~ and of course there would be no rotten tomatos!!!! i am happy that you wrote for me!!! :D

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kimeunhoon July 12 2013, 10:06:09 UTC
omg this is absolutely amazing, i love it SO MUCH
good job authornim, seriously who are you hehehe
you're become my fav author you know
its lovely and its kailu and thank you ♥

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pleaseuu July 21 2013, 15:24:58 UTC
haha no thank you for taking the time to read this and actually liking it enough to comment ♥

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