Title: give me a star (or stardust, if you will)
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seulpeoPairing: Luhan/Kai
Rating: pg-13
Length: 10.6k
Summary, potential warnings: When Jongin was a child, he dreamt of dreams; when reality came crashing down on him, he dreamt of revenge; when he began solving crime, he dreamt of justice; now, when he’s with Lu Han, he dreams of love and a happy
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I kind of guessed it would be either Luhan or Jongin from the note at the beginning, but I couldn't figure out how. And then Jongin started having headaches and weird dreams and I was like oooooooooooh okay :(((((((( Luhan wanting to protect and save Jongin is so precious. His inability to save him was heartbreaking. Good job!
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thanks for reading and liking it though asdfghjkl hugs <3
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did you know that line made my whole day and i couldn't stop smiling ;-; i was very much cheered up by that. thank you for liking it though! the star story was a last-minute thing that i incorporated at the last minute heh but it made the story like a million times better so yay!
but yup, jongin isn't the type to show his love in public a lot but the quiet ones are the ones who has the most love buried inside!
♥
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huhu im not the best at writing suspenseful more action or mystery-like fics so im really glad that you write one for me especially with my favorite jongin otp :3
a few things that i especially liked was the seeking justice instead of revenge and how lu han was jongin nightmare catcher(!!) and of course all the star imagery, that was really nice ;_; and i kind of knew all along that jongin would be kai/the killer but you know how you just hope beyond hope that the main character isnt :'(
thank you~ thank you writer-chan~~~~ ;A;
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i'm sorry this was really badly written /whimpers/ but i'm just glad you're not throwing rotten tomatoes at me!!
thank you for providing me with the wonderful prompts ♥
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im really glad you found my prompts inspiring~ and of course there would be no rotten tomatos!!!! i am happy that you wrote for me!!! :D
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good job authornim, seriously who are you hehehe
you're become my fav author you know
its lovely and its kailu and thank you ♥
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