The Art of Subconscious Illusion Ch 1 - Tension

[ruin_takada]

Full Summary: The rewritten version of the original well-loved fic, this portrays the story of the fight between House the diagnostician and the mental patient who calls himself Kira. One week is all that is allotted for him and his team to save Kira from the world and himself…and House's neck is on the line.

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Chapter One

[ext_1455026]

I really enjoyed this chapter and in my opinion this is a very good start. I say this as it is increasigly interesting in many ways such as the continous idea of the "Blond Haired Girl". I love how this aspect continues through the chapter. Another thing i enjoy is how the tension builds up. What i mean by this are the certain aspects such as the fickering light, I think it is good how this slowly gets more intense and i think this is very clever. The "Brown Haired classmate" is a brilliant character for a whole host of reasons. These include the idea of how he is unsure of his actions. And i love the way he is described, using words such as satanic makes it fell more sinister and dark than ever. The end is very good. I say this because it makes me think. Did he know he was doing this or was something more powerful controling him. So overall a very good chapter and it makes me wonder. What Next?