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rude_not_ginger

for realmofthemuse: 1.61.1: Justifiable Homicide

Jun 06, 2007 21:08

( You believe there is justice in this form of homicide? Cut for spoilers to 3.09, 'Family of Blood'. )

persona: john smith

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Re: OOC rude_not_ginger June 7 2007, 01:24:55 UTC

Thank you very much!!

Re: OOC tatteredpsyche June 7 2007, 02:10:04 UTC

Awesome! I loved this, you've woven it into the story so perfectly.

Re: OOC rude_not_ginger June 7 2007, 02:14:05 UTC

Thank you very much! It was a missing scene I think was begging to be written.

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ambitious_woman June 7 2007, 03:22:10 UTC

He looks ordinary but not, all at the same time.

He is also the final proof that I have never been a real person, that my life has been nothing but a lie. I start to cry again and I must look deeply foolish, but the Doctor says nothing. He simply places his hands inside of his pockets and waits. Eternal patience of a Time Lord, I suppose.

"My whole life, it's all-I'm not real. I'm just a story." I know I am blubbering, but I can not stop. The Doctor doesn't ask me to. He simply stands there. In many ways, it is worse.

Just simply AMAZING. It paints the perfect, painful picture. Their clothing, their expressions, their breath in the air and their pain exposed.

Bravo!

*loves*

rude_not_ginger June 7 2007, 06:01:48 UTC

*HUGS SO TIGHT*

Your opinion means the world to me, babers! Thank you!

OOC. susan_who June 7 2007, 04:05:02 UTC

see, I was just going to read until I got my journal setup, but that was so lovely I had to de-lurk.
I shake my head, "Joan would not...she would not give her heart to a story."
beautiful line. We all give our hearts to the story, don't we?
I loved this.
*goes back to quietly lurking and working on her own stories*

Re: OOC. rude_not_ginger June 7 2007, 06:02:27 UTC

Oh, thank you so much!

OOOOOH, A Susan journal! *mad squeeage* Plannin' on playin' her anywhere?

Re: OOC. susan_who June 8 2007, 03:30:49 UTC

I was going to app theatrical muse once I get her backstory sorted.
I'm trying to work out where Lungbarrow fits in (if it does)
and exactly what happens in Legacy of the Daleks, Wikipedia is a bit vague on details.

OOC captjacksparrow June 7 2007, 05:33:39 UTC

Wow. That's really, really lovely. I just dled the ep last night and this is just... wow. A++ and all that.

Re: OOC rude_not_ginger June 7 2007, 06:03:45 UTC

Thank you very much! The whole episode was very moving, and I've had this idea in my head since I saw it!

OOC stolehispurse June 7 2007, 06:23:12 UTC

It was indeed a scene waiting to be written... You are brilliant! *tries to stifle sobs at work*

The Doctor does what is right. Not what is good or beautiful, but what he believes is right.

I think that should be written down somewhere. Wikipedia, or the official BBC site, or something...

Instantly, I wish I had never thought to ask. He had kindness in his soul before, but they have gone beyond his levels of pity

Oh he would indeed be, John Smith. Pitiful, brave, defeated and heroic John Smith...

Ahh... Kudos to you!

Re: OOC rude_not_ginger June 7 2007, 23:35:46 UTC

Oh, thank you so much!

*huggles*