for chips_remixed: Faith (A Long Goodbye Remix)

[rude_not_ginger]

Remix Title: Faith (The Long Goodbye Remix)
Remix Author: rude_not_ginger
Remixed fic: Faith
Remixed author: jellybean728
Characters/Pairings: TenII/Rose UST, Jackie/Pete
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Word Count: 3,237
Summary: Rose and the duplicate Doctor suffer a crisis of his identity at their first Christmas on the other universe. Jackie tries to play matchmaker
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Comments

[jellybean728]

I like this very much.

I think this:

"Mummy's getting you a gift, sweetheart, don't play with that," Pete says. When she hands the toddler a package, he slips a smaller one into her hand, too.

"What's this?" she asks. She puts Tony in her lap and opens the package. It contains a slim, grey mobile phone.

"It's my phone," he says. "It's off. For today. For every important day, Jackie. I can't always be here, but I'll always be here for you."

Jackie feels her eyes tear and she leans up to press a kiss to Pete's mouth. She pulls back after a moment. "This isn't your only gift for me, right?"

is my favorite part. It fits the feel of the whole thing wonderfully, and it's so very Jackie. It reminds me very strongly of thePete & Jackie's reunion scene from the Army of Ghosts/Doomsday episodes.

[papilio_luna]

Oh, I liked your twist at the end with the Doctor leaving being proof that he's really still the Doctor. Very nicely done!